FF: Arshi: 101 letters(22 Dec thread2 pg158)

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segad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

to be honest, i didn't feel too much ego just what is natural for an athlete at that age. his not showing a reaction to his father's absence says something about him, doesn't it?

which kid can stomach so much?

Lage raho

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vittoriA Giardano

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

Hmmm... Interesting. For a teenager to have no support from dad? Ouch! Will wait for the next update to find out more! Thanks for the PM.😃

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BSRaizada

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Lovely.. Keep up the good work

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natalie12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

this is the first time im reading abt arhi soo young.
khushis my age.

updt soon

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Khadija

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Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#65

Reserwa...will comment later! In a hurry!

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shagun05

@shagun05

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Posted: 12 years ago

#66

nice update showing the character traits of Arnav... waiting for the next

update. Thanks for the PM.

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pakpearl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#67

nice start...thanx 4 d pm,dear !!!! 😛 i expect my khushi's full intro in the next update 😃

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kriti_atharv

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Posted: 12 years ago

#68

wow awsuuum update hun...really nice...loved it n thnx 4da pm dear...

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jenshad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#69

Seems Interesting 😳

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smitzy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: masam
Okay so a really interesting update.

Liberation.
Victory.
Determination.

All of the traits that our boy is known for.
And not seeing his father, a twist there? The happiness and warmth that he felt after embracing his Ma was heart tugging but clearly his parents have marital problems, and the effect is there. Even in the excerpt.

Great job, keep up the good work :)

Not seeing the father, well I intend to add some part from the initial reel life storyline about the father.. it should deviate afterwards.

thanks hun! 😊