ArsHi FF - The First Rain-Imp NOTE on Page 22

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Sona

@mistyrains

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

Should I invite fellow slave drivers to trouble you for the next part? Hmph.

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inspiringstars

@inspiringstars

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: mistyrains
Should I invite fellow slave drivers to trouble you for the next part? Hmph.

😆

Have been busy this past week, so haven't written anything. Will do so in a few days, I dont know if its going to make any sense, because I was really not convinced in my head to continue it.

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BlueMystique

@BlueMystique

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Where is my next part!? Pankti! #Glare

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Sona

@mistyrains

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

Take your time, I will be waiting.#smirks

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Vee

@reflorated

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: inspiringstars

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Have been busy this past week, so haven't written anything. Will do so in a few days, I dont know if its going to make any sense, because I was really not convinced in my head to continue it.

Did somebody mention slavedrivers and updates? 😆

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Applebee

@Applebee

Navigator

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#66

Its really pouring where I am right now. Cold. The perfect weather to read what you've written... Its beautiful. I am glad that you moved away from their root characters. Given them a past of their own. More likeable. I liked how you had shaped the whole story. Wonderful read. Thank you.

Edited by bingala - 12 years ago

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BlueMystique

@BlueMystique

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#67

You don't love me anymore, do you? :(

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Achu

@arshy4ever

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

#68

Amazing... 👏Please do continue...

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Shobhana

@-Shobhu21-

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#69

I know Im extremely late, But Im still gonna ask, can we get a sequel to this, please ??

And MR.P, tell him thank you ! And Im damn sure, you both must make a great couple !

The OS speaks volumes !
And the mood you set up, the sadness being a part of every beautiful relationship brought out amazingly !

And the card Arnav gives to a yound Khushi !
Woww ! I loved that !

Loved the OS, which I hope soon turns into an SS 😉 !

Love ya Pankti !
Tussi sachi me great ho !, Tofu kabul ho 😆