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Mauli

@mpatel97508

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Posted: 19 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: sweet_jaanu27
hey! just read ur whole fan-fic today! its really good 👏 👏 👏 keep it up =] continue sooonn! 😃

thanks jaanu!!!!!!!!!

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Ruhee

@night girl

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Posted: 19 years ago

#82

wow realy good continue soon make angad start beliveing in love soon to good 😃

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Posted: 19 years ago

#83

that's so sad that kripa had to go through all that....well at least now angad's here, he'll make everything perfect 😆
pls. continue soon
-Amrit

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Sameen

@silly_gurl

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Posted: 19 years ago

#84

wow awsome. angad isnt as naughty as i thought 😆 😆 😆 krips story is soo sad. poor baby. 😭 😭

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Mauli

@mpatel97508

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Posted: 19 years ago

#85

PaRt 7:
{Really long part}

ReCaP:

A- You're hired!! You have such great talent and you tried to hide it!!
K- Thanks Angad!!
A- No problem!

NoW:

A (yells)- Ram Singh!!

Ram Singh comes running in.

R- Kya Hua?
A- I want you to buy Kripa the most beautiful sari in the shop!
R- Theek Hain...
A (whispers in his ears)- Get one that makes her look HOT!!
R- um.. theek hain...

Ram Singh leaves. Kripa is confused why Angad whispered in his ear.

K- Angad what did you say to him?
A- Nothing much..
K- What did you say!!
A- Ok Ok...(grins) I told him that you are the hottest girl in the world!!!!
K (wining)- ANGAD!!
A- Ok... Well I'm going to change..
K- I'll wait for R... Ram Kaka...
A- Why are you calling him kaka?
K- I RESPECT people that are older than me!!
A (smirks)- So you RESPECT me too?
K (blushes)- Angad!
A- Ok..Ok.. I'm leaving! Shish!!

Ram Singh broght an embroided blue sari. Kripa smiles.

K- Thank you Ram Kaka!!
R (happy)- Jeta raho Beti!!

Kripa went in the bathroom to change into the sari. Kripa had never worn a sari but tried it. She looked preety!

Angad was waiting for her to come out from the bathroom. He was hiding by the door. Then Kripa comes out.

A- BOOO!!
K (jumps a little)- AHHH!!!!

Kripa trips a little because of the sari and is about to fall. She closes her eyes and Angad catches her and looks at her beauty. Then Kripa realizes she is ok so she tries to get up but Angad's grip is to strong.

K- Um.. Angad... Please let me go!
A (in his world)- No I want to hold you for the rest of my life!
K (shocked that he said that)- WHAT!????????

Angad snaps out of his world and lets go of Kripa. Kripa falls on the bed face-front and she gets mad at Angad. Kripa gets up and is about to start screaming but sees Angad's eyes. In them she sees passion and a worring Angad. Kripa gets worried.

K- Tum theek ho na?
A- Yeah yeah...
K- To chale?
A- Chale...

They go outside and sit in Angad's car. They talk until they get to the studio.

A- Kripa...
K- Hmm..
A- I have to tell you something!
K- What..
A- I think I'm falling in love with you!
K (shocked)- WHAT!?!?!?!?
A (burst out laughing)- God... you're so easy to fool!
K- I hate you Angad!!!!
A- Tell me something I don't know!
K- Whatever...

They both get out of the car. Kripa is nervous. Angad sees this and smirks.

A- Kripa this isn't your marriage!
K- ShUt up!
A- Take a chill pill...
K- SHUT UP!!
A- Ok Ok... Shutting up!

After a while of staring at the studio Kripa starts to speak.

K- Angad... Can we go in now?
A------
K- Angad...
A-----
K- Ok.. I'm sorry you can talk now...
A-----
K- UFFFF!!!!!

Kripa starts to walk in. Angad holds her arm and makes her face him.

A- Where do you think YOU are going without me?

Kripa smiles.

K- No where...
A- Ok.. Let's go!

They go in the studio. Inside there are a lot of girls in short clothes and Angad is staring at them. Kripa sees Angad and pushes him. He almost falls. Kripa bursts out laughing.

A- Hey... What was that for?
K- For being dumb!

Angad pushes Kripa gentley. Kripa is about to fall but a pair of muscular arms catch her. Kripa has her eyes closed tight. When she realizes someone caught her she opens her eyes thinking it's Angad. When she opens her eyes she sees a handsome guy standing there with love in his eyes. Kripa looks deep into his sandy brown eyes. She feels like she is staring at the sand at a beach. Angad is watching this and smiles.

A- Ahem...

Both of them snap out of their trance. Kripa slowly gets up.

K (shyly)- Thanks!
S- No prob..

Angad walks up to the guy and gives a high five.

A- Hey dude!
S- Hey Angad!

Kripa is a silent watcher of their conversation.

A (grins)- I see you've meet my wife.
S+K(shocked)- WHAT!?!
A (bursts out laughing)- OMG!! You're starting to act like her too!!
S- Why are you laughing?
K- Yeah Angad? Tell him!! I'm NOT your wife!!
S (looks at Kripa)- You're not?
K- NO!!
S- Oh... Well by the way I'm Soham..Soham Kapoor... (puts his hand out and smiles)
K (shakes his hand while smiling)- I'm Kripa Sharma...
S- Nice to meet you!
K- You too!
A- If your done with your chats can we practice for our show?
S+K- Of course!

{Soham is Angad's friend and manager. He is 22 years old, a year younger than Angad! He believes in love. He will be played by..... none other than..... Ejaz Khan!}

Soham takes Kripa to the changing room while Angad is practicing. Kripa smiles. Soham gives her a loose Salwaar to Kripa. Kripa smiles.

K (shyly)- Thanks...
S- Hey... we're friends.. no thanks and no sorrys!!
K- Sor.. I mean ok..

They both giggle a litte.

S- Um... you can change now..
K (blushes)- After you go out...
S- Oh.. yeah..

Soham goes out and Kripa changes. Kripa comes out and Soham stares at her. Kripa feels someones stare so looks. She sees Soham staring at her and blushes. Angad sees Kripa blush and follows her gaze. She is staring at Soham.

A (thinking)- Wow! I think Kripa is falling for Soham.. and Soham is falling for Kripa.. This will get good.. (outloud)- Kripa...

Kripa looks at Angad and stops blushing. Soham also looks at Angad.

A (grins big)- We have to practice..
K (hesitant)- Um.. yeah...

Soham turns on the music. Today they are only practicing on the dancing. The song is Humko Deewana Kar Gaye.

While the song is playing, Angad is dancing really close to Kripa and grinning big {Like in the show when Angad was dancing with Tanu to make Kanan jealous}. Kripa kind of feels uncomfortable. Soham feels jealous and wishes he was in Angad's place. Soon they are done rehersing. Kripa stays in the salwaar and leaves the sari in the changing room for next time. Angad gets an idea.

A- Hey... Kripa... Soham... how about we meet for lunch?
S- Sure...
K- Why not...
A- And so I'm not alone with you too love birds...
S+K- ANGAD!!!
A- Ok..ok.. I'll invite my girlfriend...
S (laughs)- Who will it be this time?
A- Harshini...
K (feeling kind of jealous)- Oh...
A- And I have a feeling you two will like her..
S- Why yaar?
A- Ohh.. That's a surprise!!

Well that's it for now
I really hope that you liked this part
I got some ideas from our Neha Didi's advise!!!
Coming up: Angad annouces he is getting engaged soon! Kripa is broken for a odd reason!!!

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kashish

@Kashiish

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Posted: 19 years ago

#86

g8 part continue soon and plz don't make kripa fall for sohom lol 😆 😆

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Sameen

@silly_gurl

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Posted: 19 years ago

#87

aww that waz the best. i cant believe kripa is falling for soham instead of angad.

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Mauli

@mpatel97508

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Posted: 19 years ago

#88

thanks everyone for your wonderful comments!!!!! Love you all!!!!!!!

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sweet_jaanu27

@sweet_jaanu27

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Posted: 19 years ago

#89

fab part once again, gr8 job! 👏 👏 👏 continue soon, cant wait to read more! 😃

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Divjot_10

@Divjot_10

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Posted: 19 years ago

#90

HI,
I just started reading the ff. I'm totally enjoying reading it......... I think ur story is amazing..... I love angad's character in it...... In the beginning I was like what is goin on.... Kripa a club dancer and Angad a total flirter who doesn't even give a damn about others ..... but as i started reading i definitely like how they suddenly got closer as friends.......... It was really catchy how the story started..... with Kripa all dressed up... I thought it was her wedding 😛 ..... I'm sure others thought so too.How come Soham and Kripa totally clicked....... It is about Angad and Kripa ...... right 😕 ......... I hope so..... Love the story. U have definitely got some talent there. Awesome storyline. Excellent job!! Good Luck and Bye
Divjot 😃

Edited by Divjot_10 - 19 years ago

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