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Posted: 19 years ago
#71
PaRt 6:

ReCaP:

K (smiles)- Thanks..
A- Ok.. Let's go eat!
K- Ok!

NoW:

They go downstairs. Kripa trips and Angad catches her. They stare at each others eyes. Kripa tries to resist looking at his blank brown eyes. Kripa looks away and gets up.

K- Thanks...
A- Anytime!!
K (smiles)- I'm hungry!
A- Me too!

They go down and sit at the table. Angad takes a bite of the pancakes and yells.

A- Ram Singh!! Ram Singh!!!

Ram Singh comes running there.

R- Kya huwa??
A- What is this??
R- Food!
A- I know that you fool....
R- Then what's wrong??
A- You know I don't like pancakes that are flat.... I want puffy ones!!
R- Ok sir...

Ram Singh leaves. Kripa was watching this and is scared of Angad's mean side. Angad looks at a frightened Kripa...

A- Kripa...
K------
A- Sorry about that...
K- Why did you yell at him?? These pancakes are so good!

Kripa continues eating. Angad watches her eat and is upset.

A- Sorry if I hurt your feelings...
K------

Kripa doesn't pay attention.

A- Come on Kripa.. Talk to me...
K- What??
A- That's better...
A- Ok.. I have a question... Why do you work at a bar??
K- I...
A- If you consider me your friend, tell me!
K- I have to.... My dad morgaged our house to a person because we didn't have enough money to pay for it.... 3 years ago, my dad passed away but I still had to pay or they would take away my house (gets tears)... I tried appling for many jobs but no one let me work because I never went to school... Then a person told me that the only way I can earn a lot is by dancing... So I started to dance.... I never wanted to do that.... It is the only way I can make the money that I owe... But recently, they just fired me because they said I tried to trap a guy for his money.... (cries) But I didn't.... He was misbehaving with me... then he fainted.... And I took that chance and ran away....

Angad is shocked that she had such a sad story. Then Angad gets an idea.

A- I have an idea!!
K (dull)- What??
A- I was looking for a female singer for my concerts....
K- And...
A- I want to hear you sing! If I like your voice.. You're hired!! And you can pay for your house!!
K- But..
A- No but's! I want to hear you sing now!!
K- I...
A- Please Kripa! I'm giving you a great offer that others would die for!
K- Ok...

Kripa sings


Tere liye, ham hain jiye, honton ko siye
Tere liye, ham hain jiye, har aansoo piye
Dil mein magar, jalte rahe, chaahat ke diye
Tere liye, tere liye
Tere liye, ham hain jiye, har aansoo piye
Tere liye, ham hain jiye, honton ko siye
Dil mein magar, jalte rahe, chaahat ke diye
Tere liye, tere liye


Aa......
Zindagi, le ke aayi hai, beete dinon ki kitaab -2
Ghere hain, ab hamein, yaadein be-hisaab
Bin poochhe, mile mujhe, kitne saare jawaab
Chaaha tha kya, paaya hai kya, hamne dekhiye
Dil mein magar, jalte rahe, chaahat ke diye
Tere liye, tere liye


Kya kahoon, duniya ne kiya, mujh se kaisa bair -2
Hukam tha, main jiyun, lekin tere baghair
Naadaan hai woh, kehte hain jo, mere liye tum ho ghair
Kitne sitam, hampe sanam, logon ne kiye
Dil mein magar, jalte rahe, chaahat ke diye
Tere liye, tere liye
Tere liye, ham hain jiye, honton ko siye
Tere liye, ham hain jiye, har aansoo piye
Dil mein magar, jalte rahe, chaahat ke diye
Tere liye, tere liye
Tere liye -4


Angad is amazed by her amazing voice. He claps.

A- You're hired!! You have such great talent and you tried to hide it!!
K- Thanks Angad!!
A- No problem!

HoPe YoU lIkE iT!
LoVe AlWaYz,
MaUlI
girlie18 thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#72
Brilliant Part 😛 😛 😛 cont.soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#73
awesome part 😊 😊 😊
continue soon 😊 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#74
awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!!!!! 👏
ruby89 thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#75
amazing part 👏.. bichari kripa ki sad story 😭 but angad isnt so naughty anymore 😆
continue soon 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#76
Just finished reading must say its amazing!!

Iqra
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Posted: 19 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: ruby89

amazing part 👏.. bichari kripa ki sad story 😭 but angad isnt so naughty anymore 😆
continue soon 👏

yeah angad isn't naughty anymore...😆 but he will be😆 and thanks ruby didi! for liking it!!!😃

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Posted: 19 years ago
#78
hey! just read ur whole fan-fic today! its really good 👏 👏 👏 keep it up =] continue sooonn! 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#79
that was a g8 part continue soon 😃 😃 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#80
thats was awesome👏....continue soon😛

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