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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: anushruthi

Awesome update

manveer memories were touching


thnks so much anu
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Ashish.Holic

awsomee...update
plzzz..update soon thanx for PM.


thanks so much sweta
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Posted: 12 years ago
Finally you updated!!😃
i love both your SS they are just amazing👏 wonderful, fantastic,lovely update👏hats off to your work...! the update was so good, a jealous manyata😆she feels something for uday 😳but her ego never lets her admit it😳, Awww, she misses udayVeer a lot, her small box and his given flower😭i felt so sad for her, she really loves him alot, why did you have to stop it there😡 i think it's uday 😃 who knocked!!
wonderful update,👏 thanks for the pm😛 and update soon please😃
🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Hi Andy 😊.

Great update Dear 👍🏼.
Uday and Unnati's scene at the coffee-shop was so sweet and beautiful. I love the bonding that's happening between the siblings. Even though they are unaware that they REALLY ARE RELATED , they feel some connection to each other😳. I thoroughly enjoyed that sequence. Nicely done Andy 👏. But trust Manyata to provide a WRONG INTERPRETATION of the entire scene , but then we can't actually blame her either , her angle of view was skewed😆 ... Uday's head blocked the main part😉!!!
To Manyata , Uday is not a stranger ; yet she still thinks him to be a gold-digger😕!!! What if uday was a gold digger? I have only 1 thing to ask her , IS THAT THE FACE OF A GOLD-DIGGER ☺️?

She just could not digest the fact that uday was close to unnathi😡 ... I think some of her inner-most , hidden feelings for him are coming to the surface😉😳.

M: but I see that you were not so bored in my absence( implying the coffee with uday). Jalan ho rahi hain😳😆!

Another great moment was when Manyata threatened Uday to stay away from Unnati ... I could just picture his confused face there😕😆.
Poor Unnati had to bear the brunt of Manyata's anger ... in the form of silence ... Manyata should have told her the reason for her being perturbed , at least Unnati could've sorted it out there and then !!! (But then , as Uday says : MANYATA IS STUBBORN😉).
Manyata remembering HER UDAY was wonderful ... all those flash-back sequences , those little trinkets of memories - TOO CUTE / SWEET & BEAUTIFUL😳. Awesome job on that Andy👏.

U: while plucking the rose, the rose plant hurt me M: oh it must be paining lets go hurt the rose flower back Awww ... SO SWEET !!!! Perfect scene 😳👏👏👏!!!

Wherever you are I want to see you , if you are still alive then come to me this instant said manyata. "mam" said a voice . The most appropriate ending for this chapter 👍🏼. Her heart called out to him ... and he responded at once😉!

Guys I updated finally ... thank God for little miracles😆!

Hope this chap was long enough😃 ... Quantity does NOT matter Andy , Quality does!!!

Navi this chap is for you as I promised ... THANK YOU ANDY - I LOVED IT❤️.

You really did help me in this update. Thanks so much navi😃 ... But I hardly did anything😕.

Guys, do hit the like button ... DONE 👍🏼.

And don't forget to comment too ... Also done 👍🏼.

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Andy , u are a wonderful person & a great friend. I value your frienship a lot. U supported so much the last few days , then ;cheering me up by dedicating this chapter to me ... it means a lot! Thank u Dear ... & thanx 4 this lovely update . Do continue soon😊.
Edited by ...navina... - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -Zina-

Finally you updated!!😃yes i did
i love both your SS they are just amazing👏 wonderful, fantastic,lovely update👏hats off to your work...! thamk you so much dear, this means a lot to me as you like my works as you yourself is a great writerthe update was so good, a jealous manyata😆she feels something for uday yes but she will never agree it😳but her ego never lets her admit it😳, Awww, she misses udayVeer a lot, her small box and his given flower😭i felt so sad for her, she really loves him alot, why did you have to stop it there😡 i had to as the next part needs to start over there i think it's uday 😃 who knocked!!do you really think so
wonderful update,👏 thanks for the pm😛 and update soon please😃
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huggs the next update will be next week as i have to update the second shadow too

thanks so much zina for this lovely comment i simply loved it
thanks once more😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Hi Andy 😊.hi navi 😃

Great update Dear 👍🏼.thanks so much navi😆
Uday and Unnati's scene at the coffee-shop was so sweet and beautiful. I love the bonding that's happening between the siblings. Even though they are unaware that they REALLY ARE RELATED , they feel some connection to each other😳. I thoroughly enjoyed that sequence. Nicely done Andy 👏. But trust Manyata to provide a WRONG INTERPRETATION of the entire scene , but then we can't actually blame her either , her angle of view was skewed😆 ... Uday's head blocked the main part😉!!!that was entirely your idea i just wrote it down. thanks so much for it
To Manyata , Uday is not a stranger ; yet she still thinks him to be a gold-digger😕!!! What if uday was a gold digger? I have only 1 thing to ask her , IS THAT THE FACE OF A GOLD-DIGGER ☺️?does the face always tell a persons intentions. did mr shark look like a criminal?

She just could not digest the fact that uday was close to unnathi😡 ... I think some of her inner-most , hidden feelings for him are coming to the surface😉😳.yes but she will never agree it

M: but I see that you were not so bored in my absence( implying the coffee with uday). Jalan ho rahi hain😳😆!yes that too thick smoke. she was boiling like a volcano😃

Another great moment was when Manyata threatened Uday to stay away from Unnati ... I could just picture his confused face there😕😆.poor uday he will never understand what is going in her mind
Poor Unnati had to bear the brunt of Manyata's anger ... in the form of silence ... Manyata should have told her the reason for her being perturbed , at least Unnati could've sorted it out there and then !!! (But then , as Uday says : MANYATA IS STUBBORN😉).
dont expect any such behavior from manyata she is too stubborn to change her mind once she has set it
Manyata remembering HER UDAY was wonderful ... all those flash-back sequences , those little trinkets of memories - TOO CUTE / SWEET & BEAUTIFUL😳. Awesome job on that Andy👏. 😳😃 thank you navi

U: while plucking the rose, the rose plant hurt me M: oh it must be paining lets go hurt the rose flower back Awww ... SO SWEET !!!! Perfect scene 😳👏👏👏!!!really?😳

Wherever you are I want to see you , if you are still alive then come to me this instant said manyata. "mam" said a voice . The most appropriate ending for this chapter 👍🏼. Her heart called out to him ... and he responded at once😉!but unfortunately both of them will never agree on that matter though their souls feels so

Guys I updated finally ... thank God for little miracles😆!navi dont i update regularly?

Hope this chap was long enough😃 ... Quantity does NOT matter Andy , Quality does!!! thanks navi, many did say the last chap was short so i wanted to make it a bit long

Navi this chap is for you as I promised ... THANK YOU ANDY - I LOVED IT❤️.and i am so happy that you loved it😃

You really did help me in this update. Thanks so much navi😃 ... But I hardly did anything😕. no you really helped me to shape that scene. dont deny it

Guys, do hit the like button ... DONE 👍🏼.saw it

And don't forget to comment too ... Also done 👍🏼.reading it now

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Andy , u are a wonderful person & a great friend. I value your frienship a lot. U supported so much the last few days , then ;cheering me up by dedicating this chapter to me ... it means a lot! Thank u Dear ... & thanx 4 this lovely update . Do continue soon😊.navi i did only what a friend should do . you too would have done the same for me. writing updates is the way i cheer people navi
and i return this hug back to you come let me hug you too😳
navi as always your comment bring a smile on my face
i rreally look forward to read your comments😃
love you 😳
andy

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Posted: 12 years ago
oh i lvd it...means she went sooo emotional while looking those things...nd the ending 'uday plz come back' nd here is he 'mam'...i got sooo involved in it ki i didnt evn realise that m reading a story not watching it or feeling it!!!! Plzzz update the nxt part soon sooner soonest..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: cherry.parul0

oh i lvd it...means she went sooo emotional while looking those things...nd the ending 'uday plz come back' nd here is he 'mam'...i got sooo involved in it ki i didnt evn realise that m reading a story not watching it or feeling it!!!! Plzzz update the nxt part soon sooner soonest..

thanks so much dear. really happy to know you enjoyed it 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
I am so sorry i noe i have been a lazy queen bt nxt tym se pkka tym pe unres kr longi 😉 *Mujhe seriously mat lena🤣*
Amazing,superb,astonishingly emotional update 👏 👏
Awe poor manyata she misses her BF [:'(]
Dat whole rose thing ws so cute❤️
She has a box filled wid uday's memories😃
Uday is sch a swt heart 😊
I lyk the jealous manyata 😆
So uday uday hai ye kb reveal hoga???
Do it ASAP or zinu ki baaton pe dhyaan do😉
Edited by Sanarasheedroxx - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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