FF: D for Desire #2 (Ch 15 - 21)

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Tanumon

@Tanumon

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#581

nice update.

ps. don't add this type of mind disracting ,heart warming, brain numbing pic at the end of ur update.i almost forget what i read.

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varsha komuravelli

@kvarsha

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#582

amazingg ...

am loving arhii here

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karsvinu

@karsvinu

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#583

Nice update!...enjoyed it totally😊

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nehaarshi

@nehaarshi

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#584

Eee i loved it!! After soo long finally got to read ur update :)
Hope u update the next part soon n again it was amazing!

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Pavithra

@alicepuppy

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#585

amazing update after a longtime...

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segad

@segad

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#586

would it be ok if i said, aage bhi to bolo na?

maybe it is a consequence of the slow updates and that we have been stuck in this 24 hr period for the last how many updates, the story seems to be stuck a bit. need more conversations or events to make it move.

sorry for the criticism but it feels like a pot on simmer with only an occasional bubble coming up.

liked his conversation with her parents though.

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Stapleton

@Stapleton

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#587

awesome update.

thanks 4 d pm

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ranogill

@ranogill

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#588

please update soon again...loving it

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LyssaPie

@LyssaPie

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#589

That was so perfect,
He actually had a conversation with her parents...
Now they finally kissed
I wonder if she'll call him baby before going home...
Loved the update

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Jahnvi Mehra

@jahnvi.luvs.ASR

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#590

so i came across ur ff randomly n read this whole in one go...have a lot to say but as m online 4m mobile its difficult 4 me to give u a proper comment n a random 'it was a gud story, awesome writing' comment wont justify the impeccability of this fiction...so m just here to ensure u that i'll comment if u plz accept me as an ardent reader of ur story...tomorrow there'll be a proper comment...sorry:-(

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as promised m here...

ur story as i said i came across it randomly...its amazing...

the characters so damn perfectly moulded...

i mean khushi is crazy, beautiful, charming the way i always wanted her to picture in show also...

she came up with the stupid idea but it back fired her...and now the way they are taking this unnamed relationship to somewhere...they are giving it a shot...knowing each other...opening up to each other..sharing everything but taking things slowly...i so wanted to happen something like this...a proper and logical conversation in serial too...

the last two updates were just amazing...when i read that line about her addressing him as baby...i thought he dint notice..but he did...yay...

and the way they were sitting near koi pond...without saying anythng and giving into silence...letting it do the work...

arnav and khushi...if we had got this certain pair with this package like u have given...i m sure i would have loved the show more and more :) not that i dont love it...but still...

thanks for sharing this story with us :)

i'll shut up now...

Edited by jahnvi.luvs.ASR - 12 years ago