FF: D for Desire #2 (Ch 15 - 21)

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Omoraboti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#501

Originally posted by: Ruki.F
Wishing U Merry Christmas and Happy New Year

Belated Christmas & New Year wishes dear.

Thanks for being with my stories all through. 😊

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Omoraboti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#502

Originally posted by: Akorshi
at last u updated my fav ff...
thanku...😃
it was a peaceful n beautiful update...
the way u described the apartment...m dreaming the apartment...😊
tht lil hw it will be look like in real...
so they both r comfortable to each other..
wid their past...they hug...it was lovely...
diabetics only 50-60's old mans...😆
khushi crazy...
it was very cute night fr them...
waiting fr next part update soon...

Thanks for reading.

Thanks for the comment.

And above all ..

Thanks for the visual treat. 😃

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Omoraboti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#503

Originally posted by: TabbyJ.
amazing update loved it!!!
arnav and khushi opened up to each other, setting aside the desire, they discovered more about the other!!!

They have just started opening up .. hope they will know each other more soon.

Thanks for reading! 🤗

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Omoraboti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#504

Originally posted by: love.khushi
Hey i read ur ff in a go
it was just awesome
loved it to d core
great concept n loved the way u have written
do continue soon waiting eagerly for d next part

Welcome on board dear. Thank you so much for the sweet comment. The update, as promised you a page back, will be next week. 😊

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Omoraboti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#505

Originally posted by: iritz
Farha...

Loved the update... Loving this side of Arnav... Like Khushi, would love to know more... go deeper than the surface... please, please, please update sooner !!!

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Ritz!

We will never stop wanting to learn more about him .. will we?? 😆

Going deeper than the surface .. yeap. We are going straight in there now. 😊 But surface will be there .. with more intensity as the connection going even deeper! 😉

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Omoraboti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#506

Originally posted by: ipkkndholic
Lovely-the way you turned the story into something more than superficial romance - just loved it! Waiting for next and next add next and next... Parts -keep them coming!!!

I will tell you the truth! I was planning to wrap this up in 5-6 chapters more. LOL .. but I think I am going to write more now. 😛 So I am not stopping my torture soon. 😆

Thanks for reading! 🤗

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Omoraboti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#507

Originally posted by: Bubbly420
Please update soon dont take a long break like last time 😊

😳😳😳

No long break like last time. Promise.

Next update will be by next week. My semester ends on 12th.

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Omoraboti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#508

Originally posted by: paaskhanna
am throughly enjoying this story... loved how it moved from being only physical attraction to emotional bonding...

arnav admitting that she is special is also aware that he is not ready for commitment And does not want to hurt her And still shares his innermost guarded feelings with her...

liking the pace of the story anf precap is interesting :)

Thanks for the comment, dear. You have written about Arnav just the way I wanted to portray him. He has his limitations but he is honest and not willing to make a mistake. I was a bit skeptic how readers will accept the change in the pace of the story but I am happy to see many have liked it. 😊

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Omoraboti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#509

Originally posted by: LyssaPie
aww wow they really are bonding, that's so damn sweet
Arshi telling each other stuff
and Arnav actually gave Khushi a separate room to sleep in
White fish bit was cute!

He is a gentleman after all, you see! 😆

Thanks for reading. You are one of those whose names if I dont see in the Like list, I kind of get worried. 😆 Thanks for being there and inspiring me since the time I just started writing.