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Posted: 12 years ago
#91
aww... that was a cute and lovely update.
the pics were apt..
the story of paul was soo touching..
waiting for the next update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#92
superb update, enjoyed along with them
update soon, thanks for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93
lovely update:) plz pm me for ur furthur updates:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#94
Loved the update. It was brilliant
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95
awww sooo sweet dear...loved it very much n thnx 4da pm dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#96
Wow !! amazing update ..i am in love 😳
loved it merz 😊
love u hun... so muchhh 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#97
OMG!! I loved it thoroughly...
and Merz, the link which u sent is a wrong one..
But no worries.. I found it..
Arnav has become too naughty.. loved their light romance..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#98
thank you for all the wonderful comments...🤗
yes arnav is the man of anyones dreams...
but i personally think the arnav in the prequel was much better!

some parts are slightly guttery!

this update is dedicated to my gcg princesses...and also to anamika!! miss you!

do not copy paste anywhere else without my permission!!!

Part 5

After they had finished with their submarine adventure khushi was so happy..

K: thank you arnavji that was beautiful...

A: khushi it's not over

K: kya? kuch aur bhi hai? Aap chahte hain ki main khushi se burst hojaun? ( what? There is something more? Do you wan't me to burst with joy?)

A: khushi come

K: kahan

A: just come with me

K: theek hai (ok)

He blindfolded her..

K: arnavji yeh aap kya kar rahe hain? (what are you doing?)

A: bharosa hai mujhpe? (trust me?)

K: khud se zyada (more than myself)

*****

They had finally reached their destination...and arnav slowly untied the knot.

Khushi opened her eyes to see a yacht in front of them...


K: yeh kya hai arnavji?(what is this?)

A: a private yacht for my wonderful wife...shall we go on our cruise?

Khushi's mouth was hanging open...

A: close your mouth or you know the consequences...it's quite inviting!

K: huh...umm and she quickly closed it...

A: come and he held out his hand for her to hold and enter

khushi as usual tripped and arnav caught her...but khushi was khushi she closed her eyes and started screaming...

A: KHUSHI! Your fine!

K: kya? hum gire nahi? ( what i din't fall?)

A: have i ever let you fall khushi?

K: haan! Office mein first floor se hume kisne giraya? (yes! Who let me fall from the first floor in office?)

A: do you have to remember that? Don't you remember how many times i have saved you from falling? It's happened numerous times...no wonder you don't remember...

She freed herself from his embrace, stood up and cupped his face in her hands...

K: i remember each and every fall...because it was so special...you know that made me fall in love with falling...because i would always fall straight into your arms!

A: he flashed a naughty smirk at her...and raised one eyebrow

Really?

She hit him on the chest

A: you never fail to amaze me darling...but i love to feel you in my arms...now come..

It was already getting dark...

Arnav had already created the most romantic atmosphere.

He had set up a perfect dinner table for two and made her sit..

They even fed each other...khushi just wished all this wasn't a dream...

Arnav replied as if he could read her thoughts..

Khushi our reality is more beautiful than a dream...you are the queen of my heart and i promise you that i will make you forget those dreadful moments of the past..

K: no arnavji ! i don't want to forget even one moment spent with you...be it good or bad...because it's related to you and anything to do with you is so special!

A: khushi why do you love me so much?...i don't deserve it! I hurt you and troubled you and what not!

She immediately got up and put her finger on his lips

K: shh! Don't say that again...i love you and i know you love me more than anything else in this world...you almost went against di for me arnavji! That shows my importance in your life...we don't need words to describe our feelings or reasons to love each other...we always did love each other from the beginning!

I love you and you love me that's the truth and nothing can change that...

With that she sealed her lips with his...

The kiss slowly grew from sensual to passionate and then wild! Speaking of all their emotions...finally they broke apart to breathe!

A: khushi come

He made her stand near the edge and wrapped his hands around her waist and rested his chin on her shoulder...

They both gazed up at the stars...and felt the cool breeze caressing their faces...

A: this is my heaven khushi...

She suddenly turned around and hugged him tight...he felt his shirt getting wet with her tears...he cupped her face in his hands...

What happened jaan? Why this punishment?

K: arnavji hume ghar ki bohot yaad aa rahi hai...(i'm missing home)

A: theek hai ro mat...kal subha mai tumhe sab se baat karva dunga (ok don't cry..tomorrow morning i will make you talk to everyone)

K: promise

A: i promise!

She pulled his cheeks ...mere pyare arnavji ( my sweet arnavji)

A: what the!

She snaked her arms around his neck and then rubbed her nose with his...

I'm truly, madly and crazily in love with you!

A: ditto...

He then carried her to the bed and placed her there...

He kissed her softly on her forehead...

This is for coming into my life...

He placed kisses on both her eyelids

This is for being the crazy stupid girl i fell in love with...

He placed a kiss on her left cheek..

This is for making me realise i have a heart

He kissed her on the right cheek...

This is for making me fall in love...

He then tilted his head lower near her lips...since this will be a long one...it's for marrying me...

He then crashed his lips on hers with a sudden desperation!

Khushi then imitated every action of his with dialogues...

A: shall we proceed further...khushi nodded

he had already started causing havoc and khushi was shivering at every touch of his...she wanted more and more...and his desire was soaring every second...they both wanted this sweet torment to end soon, at the same time not wanting it to end at all...

They had renewed their promises and love for each other in the passionate night they shared...two bodies and one soul...

It was like as if Venus the goddess of love, along with Hymen, Pothos and Eros were showering their blessings on the two lovers.

Precap: beach party...


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Edited by ASRHOTNEZ - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#99
Merz, y u gave a warning???
There is nothing mature here...
stop behaving like YT😆
It was so sweet..
I totally loved it❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
Great work Merz. Absolutely brilliant.

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