KRT+SS- OS/SS : Immortal (Part 2 in Pg 1) - Page 2

Awsome ss. . . . .
Bahut accha tha. . . .
Totally ek movie lag rhi hai,
superb. . . . . .
Do continue soon. . . .
And pm me wen u update the nxt part. . .
Jaldi update krna,
egarly waitng 4 it. . . .

Awesome start
Continue soon and Pm me the next part

Part 2 was also awesome ..!
Loved it Update..!
Dat bloody shivam ..!
Never mind hopefully everyone be happy in d end ..!
Just waiting Watson coming up as d promo was interesting ..!
Update Dat soon ..!

Wow!!!!!!!!! I read both the parts together. They were awesome. I really hope that it is not a Taarey OS. It has to be Kriyaansh. witing for the next update.😊

Wow. . . .
Awsome part 2. . . . .
Sharon k behaviour mai itna jaldi change. . . . .
D3 boyz fighting was Superb. . . . .
Weakling gang is superb. . . . .
Ha ha ha.*overacting gang*
Abbb m really confusd ki rey k dimaag mai kya chal raha h??
Aur abb kriya ka kya hone vala hai??
And,REYUM k beech fight. . .
*Ohh godd abb yehi din dekhne ko reh gaya tha*
nw m realy excitd ki kya hoga aage . . .
Nxt part jaldi update krna. . .
Egarly waitng 4 it. . .
N,
PLZ PLZ PLZ
PLZ PLZ
PLZ
PM ME WEN U UPDATE NXT. . . .

fabulous part...!!!!

Part-2.. Loved it.. Ooops kriya got hurt..:(
N boys fought for kriya.. :D this is our d3... One for all n all for one!!
Tani was right.. She has missed dis dosti n dil !!
I liked d change in sharon's behaviour.. N dat shivam.. Arghhh!!
Now m confused.. Whts goin on in rey's mind..!
He dint meet kriya.. But was concernd about her.. He brot kriya lying unconscious in his arms but still he dint tok to her..!
Swayam's emotions wer absolute amazin!!
Kriya has such a big heart.. She is truely a gem!
She sacrificed her dreams for her friends.. She let go her love for her frns..
She made her love to hate her so dat her love leads a great life ahead n now when she's bk she has dat heart to admit tht if swayam's sis is one for d rey thn it wud b right..
Dis is our kriya...!!

But wait.. Y did swayam defy rey.. God whts coming up!!
U know wht.. D best thing about dis stories ua showing d relation d leads share.. Lik no particular couple o something.. U showin everyone's emotion n evry aspect!!
I wonder who cud b dat family friend!!
Waitin fr d next part :)

Amazing start

FANTAStic JOB