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Posted: 12 years ago
#91
Both parts were amazing, u guys are doing fantastic job. Plz continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#92
Loved both parts...yes love is in the air...nd that creep shivam...ab vo kya karne vala hai?
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93
wow beautiful...shivam 😡 hate u
update soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#94
superbbb updates dear
oh this Shivam irritates here too 🤢
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95
1nce again awsumm update piya xx
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Posted: 12 years ago
#96
superb whn is next update plz pm me na i find it diff 2 fin d it thn
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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 19---

swayum was waiting for sharon outside the girl commn room


shivam--(yehi mauka hai) hey swayum

sw-- hey

s-- tu yahan

sw-- tujhse matlab...

s-- ,nahin aise hi pucha main GS huun after all


sw-- so wat tu GS... dnt 4r get meri behen nd meri gf yehi par hai.. n unse milne k liye mujhe teri permission nahin chahiye


s-- re nahin nahin... gussa mat ho... main to aisehi bol raha tha...wise teri behen to meri gf haina...oh... ab to main wo bhi nahin keh sakta...


sw-- what do u mean??? tum dono ka brkup...


s-- pata nahin yaar shayad taani ne kabhi mujhse pyaar hi nahi tha..woh to rey...

sw-- what??? what do u mean???


s-- tujhe nahin pata??? mujhe to khud nahin pata tha..but kal jo dekha uske baad


sw---kya dekha...

s-- kaise bataun...wo dono ek dusre ke saath...aise baithe the ki,,,,


sw--(catches his collar)---hw dare u,,, tu janta bhi hai kinke baare me baat kar raha hai...bloody bas****

s-- mujh pe chillane se kya hoga...apni behen and apne bstfrnd se pucho...


sw-- mujhe kisi se puchne ki zaroorat nahin

swayum leaves in anger...in boy comn roomsw--(calls rey)---rey kahan hai tu?? i need to talk to u,,


r-- okk im comingrey comes all tensed...


sw-- rey tu kahan tha


r-- kahin nahin...bas yehi aaise


sw-- tu mujhse kuch chupa to nahin raha na???


r-- kya bol raha hai..


sw-- jst tell me dude...main tujhe bohot trust karta hoon...


r--(remembers what shivam had said ... gets nervous..)---swayum jst relax... f9 haan mujhe tujhe kuch batana hai... mujhe bhi ye baat kuch din hi pata chali hai...


sw -- kya bol raha hai tu...pagal hai... tu aur taani


r--(shocked)-- tujhe kaise pata???...ooo shivam ne tujhe..


sw-- stop it rey tujhe pata bhi hai tu kaya kar raha hai...??


r-- sw tu galat samajh raha hai..


sw-- jst stop...how cud you...kriya ko gaye hue abhi jyada time bhi nahin hua n tu meri bahen ke saath,,,

r--(shocked)--- wat?? tujhe lagta hai ki main teri behen ko use kar raha hoon?? how cud u swayum...f9 to aj sun le mujhe kya kehna hai...haan mujhe yehi lagta tha ki kriya ke baad mein kabhi kisi se liye waisa feel nahin kar paunga.. i had lost it.. mujhe nahin pata tha main kabhi fir is feeling ko mehsus kar paunga ya nhai... but yes i did,, all thnx to Taani usne mujhe fir se ye feel karwaya,, she helped me ki main khudko us state se bahar la sakun..



rey goes from dr thinking his bstfrnd ne use blv nahin kiya,,, all shattered thinking that now what will happen... main aur taani...



the nxt part is

the end guys...





written by me pritha

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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 20--- THE END...confession… rejection nd beginning of a new love story

swayum(IN REHERSAL HALL)---- (calls taani)-- taani kahan ho tum?? jaldi aao..


T-- bhai aap...aap ho kahan.. itne tensed kyun ho...(rey was in waiting call)


(taani thinks rey waiting)...


sw--main bhahar khada hun rehersal hall ke bahar jaldi aao i need 2 talk...


t-- haan bhai aa rahi hoon...


T(calls rey) -- kya hua rey...


r-- swayaum ko sab pata chal gaya hai...


t-- kya??

r-- haan wo shayad tum se baat karne aa raha hai...try to handle it.. main aa raha hun-- okk

sw-- taani main tumse straight kuch janna chahta hun...kya tum aur rey...

t--haan bhai main rey ko like karti hun,,,


sw--(in shock) what...tumhe kuch nahin pata hai rey ke baare me... tumhe aaye time hi kitna hua hai...

t-- mujhe pata hai bhai... unke past ke baare me..n maine unhe kabhi force nahin kiya,,


sw— kya tum rey ko pehle se..?? to fir tum sivam ka saath kya …???

t--jab logo ne hamare baare me article nikala..hamare baare me baatein kar rahe the.. main darr gayi thi.. ki mere wajah se Rey ki reputatn kharab ho rahi thi..isiliye jab shivam ne mujhe offr diya to maine bhi haan kar di… I'm sryy bhai…


sw—tumhe atleast mujhe to batana chahiye than na ..tumne itna bada risk kyun liya..


whole team had reached the rehersal hall n every1 was shocked to hear taani's confession…


t--I'm sry bhai. but mere paas aur koi option nahin tha..(taani crying )


Sw—oh taani...pls stop..Shivam enters…


S—what… swayum tum ye kaise allow kar sakte ho… Taani aur Rey ne tumhe dhoka diya n tum ise kaise accpt kar sakte ho..


Sw—jst shut up..

S—tumhe jo karna hai karo but taani is mine.


(he comes 4rward to taani)But Rey blocks his way..


R—dnt even think about it. Taani ko hurt karne k bare mein sochna bhi mat.


Sw—well sivam ab to tumhe pata chal hi chukka hai ki Rey kya kehna chahta hai… i mean taani n rey ek saath hai so he has the r8 to warn u,u better take it seriously.


(every1 is shocked to hear dis..


Sharon comes to swayum nd says "good decision I'm proud of u..dey will make a awsum couple jst like us.."


Shivam goes away furiously as he has lost once again.


Every1 enjoys as tani n rey hug each other and swayum and Sharon too.


Sw to rey--- meri behen ka khyal rakhna..warna..


Rey—haan haan pata hai tu kitna possesive hai. Mereko pitna nahin hai.ab kya main apni gf ko hug kar sakta hoon??


Sw—abe saaley..


Vicky—are ab to rey swayum ka brother in law hua..


Taani blushes, , ???


Simmi –finally our swaron r officially together and a brand new coupleTAAREY,,,,,,,its official,,,,so cute…(taarey still hugging)(awww)..

.hope u people like it..

~END~





thanks... for ur commnts n likes luv u all pritha...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#99
Wow pritha this was amazing, the ending was so beautifully written. Taarey will be together forever
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Posted: 12 years ago
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WOW SUPERB PARTS👏.LOVED THE ENDING😳.U AND UR FRIEND WRITE REALLY WELL.DO WRITE MORE😊
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