MG OS : A DATE

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drrose31

@drrose31

Achiever

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

hey suhana dear

it was simple ,sweet and beautiful os

congozzz on one more os

thanks for pm

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zaara2212

@zaara2212

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

lovely os suhana 😊
will you give us an epilogue for this pls😊

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MonaSWrites

@MonaSWrites

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

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Gurti_Maaneet

@Gurti_Maaneet

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

U written it sooo beautifully...
Thanx for PM dear :)

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punam2712

@punam2712

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

BEAUTIFUL OS

LOVED THE BET AND THE DATE CONCEPT

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vrinda22

@vrinda22

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

u did it again

short n sweet

so beautiful

lovely os

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Mayamaan

@Mayamaan

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Its very sweet cute story loved it

Kuchh Khaas Hai Kuchh Paas Hai, Kuchh Ajanabi Ehsaas Hai

My fav songs so like it much for tha songs

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deeps_aga

@deeps_aga

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Loved it to the core...

it takes me into a Dream Land...

But only one complain... in the starting u have mentioned abt the gift ... "Collage" that Geet has made to gift it to Maan... but when she went to meet him, she has not taken tht with her...

If she wld have gifted tht to Maan, then it wld have turned out to be even more romantic... like was was overwhelmed to see tht someone is adoring him this much... then tht realization of his feeling wld have drawn upon him & after tht he could have asked to dance with him & propose her...

Its my point of view... so no offense to u... i just loved this OS as well as your other writings...

Continue doing the superb work...

W8ing for more of ur writings...

Love Ya...

Regards,

Deepti... <3 <3 <3 👏

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Divz

@dazzlingdivz

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#29

aoww that was a cute and sweet story how a bet a contest brought the grt Business tycoon cum meet his girl of dreams and how a Cinderella met her prince charming aoww I Just loved it mmuuahhhs
fab piece of work it was
soothing to my over burdened brain LoLz

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