FF: Kash aap hamare hote- End Pg 109, 22/06

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Sia

@satanslove

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#591

Finally ETF will catch that Mohit...😡

Riya ke neighbour toh James Bond nikle yaar😆😆

Toh if he gets caught toh Vishal aur Kaveri ka kya hoga ????

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nivanthi2

@nivanthi2

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Posted: 12 years ago

#592

awesome dr!!!!!!! 👏👏👏

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Niki

@luvzindagi

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#593

Hey
Very nice update Tina...
You updated this one after so long!
So finally our heroes are gonna get that horrible psycho Mohit in custody
I am excited for the next part now
Thanks for the PM

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sashashyam

@sashashyam

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#594

Dear Tina,

Nice and crisp, and the bit about Arjun and Babu was very convincing. I suppose you will be have Mohit trapped finally, but truth to tell, I have by now lost most of my initial interest in him. Also, after long gaps, one simply cannot pick up the flow of the story properly.

Tina, I remember that in my comments on one of your earliest chapters in this FF, I had noted that your picking a serial killer was a most promising choice, and you had replied that you knew nothing about serial killers but would take a crack at it. I must say that you have managed very well, but it is not an appetising subject, and perhaps it might be as well if you left this species alone in the future! Your contract killer in your latest is coming along very nicely.

Shyamala Aunty

Part 19

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573339

Suspended

Posted: 12 years ago

#595

great update :) loved it

love the way arjun comforted that kid

loved rathore's dialogue ""You'll make a great father Arjun! You are so good with kids!" :)

omg he was inside her house but thank god riya's neighbor informed her on the right time

hope ETF catches him soon

thanks for the pm

update soon

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devildiva21

@devildiva21

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#596

superb...!!!

arghh this mohit😡

awww sam's dialogue to arjun about him being a great father was lovely...!!! love the way arjun handled that kid...!! he was so sweet with him..!!!

waiting for that killer to be caught by etf...!!! he entered riya's house...!! thank god she was not there...!!

hope they get him soon and riya kaveri and vishal are safe while etf goes to investigate at riya's house...!!!

continue soon...!!

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Mimi2609

@Mimi2609

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#597

Originally posted by: Payal_156
Dhinka chika
me first yay
superb or thrilling update di
uff mohit hate him!!
rathod remark arjun father wow!!!
riya aww..
loved it di..

Thanks payal😊

yep even i hate Mohit😉, but dont worry he wont remain for more time now😉

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yas23

@yas23

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#598

superb update
oh so mohit went to riya home
loved wht rathore said to arjun u will be a great father
hope etf catches him soon
thanx 4 pm
continue soon

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Mimi2609

@Mimi2609

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#599

Originally posted by: ...Mithuz...
You'll make a great father Arjun! You are so good with kids!"

This is my favourite line'!!

Awesome update. Finally they are near that killer. Waiting for him to be caught.

Continue soon!

Thanks, i always felt when watching the serial that Arjun would make a great father😳, hence this line😊

yep he'll very soon be caught now😉