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RasgullaSP

@Rasgulla_sp

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#521

You write MIND GAMES girl! That's the hottest thing I have read on ArHi and you were nervous about this update??? Hello! You did a fab job. Portrayed the love and the lust so well...

Payal was sleeping with Shyam??? Of all people?

You will reveal the figure in the next update? Wow! Waiting for it. I have made no guesses so far. I will sit back and enjoy whatever you bring my way.

Mind Games please 😊

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Deepti

@deepti1906

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#522

Terrible cliff hanger...😲 😲 you can't leave it like this...😭😭 hope u update soon..😭 btw great update...👏👏👏👏👏👏 nd thanks for the pm...😊😊

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Priya

@Crazy_soul

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#523

Omg,payal was the women???.plz update soon

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sai

@KaSh-Maneet-Fan

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#524

Hiii...Awesome update...Loved it...loved ArHi...sooo hoottt...adorable...da woman was payel...awww...she sleeping with shyam...Can't wait 4 more...Con soon...Thanks 4 da pm

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luvraj4ever

@luvraj4ever

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#525

oh god!!!!! payal?????with shyam??????omg..i can't believe it...

but i guess she is not the psycho woman...

i still feel its anjali...

cont soon...can't wait for the next chapter

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shonagudia

@shonagudia

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#526

Wow so much happened in this part. Loved the part. Fianlly Khusi n Arnav became one and forever. Loved it. You really showed it beautifully. Everything was so mesmerizing with ARHI.
Payal is really sleeping with shyam. 😲 If she's woman with Shyam then i could imagine her wanting to kill Khusi. I mean Shyam always take Khusi's name whenever he's with that woman and Payal must be jealous of that ..
But i still think Payal is not mystery figure. My bet is still with Dia. I really fins that woman wired.
Continue soon...

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sushna

@sushna

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#527

wowww...awesme...

tooo...hot...😆😆☺️...

thankx for pm...

it might be natasha or anjali...

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hmm.. guess karo :P

@jas0308

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#528

finally, their wedding night is completed
very well written...😳

really i mean really.. payal she was sleeping with that creep... oh god... i didn't expect this from her😲
what happen to her??😡

i think the figure is dia... natasha's sister or may be anjali but i reallyt think it's dia🤔

thank god you will unfold the mystery of figure...
update next part soon

superb update🤗