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maya252

@maya252

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Posted: 12 years ago

#431

I wudnt lyk to believe that payal wud sleep wid shyam, i guess they caught hold of d wrong person as d ryt person might have slipped away whn she felt aman following her, moreovr if im nt wrong payal was wearing a saree ryt as she gave her spare saree to khushi...god i dont have d slightest idea, u r so damn good at dictating a suspense thriller...hats off to u

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aditi07

@aditi07

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Posted: 12 years ago

#432

fantastic update👏👏
the wedding night was written & depicted so beautifully...so sensual, hot, sizzling yet so aesthetic!!loved it tina...& loved the detailed chapter...made it very wonderful 😳😳!! Their emotions, their love overflowing through out it...superb one!!

& OMG payal has affair with shyam ?? was she the woman with him in the gardens 😲😲
& she is khushi's sister too..she might look like her, so could she be the woman??
dont know why but i Doubt it being true, i think the real woman is someone else!! payal was the one who had spilled drink on khushi, while The other woman was watching it all from away, so how could it be payal herself?? i am just too confused & rather wait for your update!!

but payal might have illicit relationship with shyam is enough to shock me out of my wits!! but on a second note, i think they have lost the real woman, caught payal while following the trail!! cant digest shyam- payal link...but indeed very gripping & thrilling!!

please please dear update this one soon...seems like this one is gonna be the most awaited one!!

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sayli

@sayli_sarun

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Posted: 12 years ago

#433

Tina i couldnt stop myself from commenting this time i hv exams from tomorrow so i was just reading updates and likeing them but this one urged me comment!!!hahaha!!
Now to the update!!
Awesome update tina!!!
Abselutely loved it!!!

So payal is sleeping with shyam??????
Ewwwewwwewww!!
The mere thought also gives me creepsss!!!!
Eewww!!!!
Ohh how much i loved payal!!**sigh**
and now akash can also hv some motive i mean right now every damn person can be involved!!!!
This is super exiting!!!!!!!
Loving it!!!
Do continue soon!!
Cant wait for big revelation!!

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Arooba

@arooba55

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Posted: 12 years ago

#434

Omg it's getting so intense, so if her so called jiji said "she's innocent" I wonder if she's the same person who was with Shyam. This is getting so scary, update the next chapter asap, I'm really curious to know who the figure is! :)

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minnie me

@minnie me

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Posted: 12 years ago

#435

I am sooo utterly confused about who the figure can be - You have kept us all in mind gripping suspense - well - I cant wait to find out!!

Thank you so much for the PM! Lovely update as usual - Oh who am I kidding - better better than usual (😉)!!

Minnie

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KKKA

@KKKA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#436

TINA ...PAYAL ...NOOO IT CANT BE

NOT THE SISTER...😔 IT WILL KILL KHUSHI

THANKS FOR THE PM

KEEP ME UPDATED

KKKA

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Anupama

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Posted: 12 years ago

#437

Woah! Payal n shyam! :| what r they upto?!
And lovemaking was beautifully written! Good work! :)

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Swetyz

@Swetyz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#438

Payal???? Really??? I don't belIeve it..don't name her the villan
What its she doing with Shyam???

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vandana.sagar

@vandana.sagar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#439

Awesome, loved their sensuous suhaag raat...but what a twist...I cannot think! Payal ? Wow!

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Sarah

@sahraa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#440

The most shocking twist ever... Payal with Shyam ... Im still trying to digest it yar... Amazing writing...if my guess is right I think it's anjali or akash...

I would bet more on akash... If Payal is the one sleeping with Shyam he every time thinks its khushi as he says her name... So they might have used her to deliver those papers at singh s house... Their handwritings, etc etc should have matched...it's all akash plan to get the property may be...

Second guess is anjali... The way she said that Payal also can be crushed along with khushi

May be Payal is just used to defame her sister and anjali or akash are the ones who wanted to kill her... If Payal wanted o kill her she might not have directed her to arnav,s room

Pls pls pls update sooonnn

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