SS: Of Lemons & Limes # 1 (Chapter 1 - 6)

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Tia.0

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Posted: 12 years ago

#861

Devi Maiyya... Can I ask you to smack these two on the head... On second thought, never mind, just smack ASR. That will do.

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varshapan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#862

oh this is just so much fun.. lovely read... no shyamu ...

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431362

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Posted: 12 years ago

#863

I must say, this plot is really refreshing.. i liked how he could not get rid of her fragrance.. That'S something new what other FFs had never managed to toucH.. and i also loved the devi maiyya part.. that was so cute aND I ADORED THE LAST LINE.. it was such a pHantastic phrase.. keep it up! and yah, khushi's tension about the tea's price was so funny as well.. =D

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multifaceted

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Posted: 12 years ago

#864

Amazing...liked the whole coffee shop thing...too good

thanks for the PM

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swat.g

@swat.g

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Posted: 12 years ago

#865

Why cant uwrite for ipkknd yaar...u rawk

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Shanaya

@arkushlove

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Posted: 12 years ago

#866

awww...such a cute n funny update...

arnav took khushi for a breeakfast date

the tea drinking part was damn funny 😆...khushi is soo innocent...❤️

khushi can't stop drooling on salman khan n arnav is nt able to bear it ...lolxx 🤣

really liked the update😃

update soon dear 😳

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swat.g

@swat.g

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Posted: 12 years ago

#867

N loved Asr's reason for scolding kkg in ofc lol..hes crazy..n devi maiyya :)

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please6

@please6

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Posted: 12 years ago

#868

love it lol arnav jealous again 😊

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TabbyJ.

@TabbyJ.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#869

hahaha rofl!!!
poor arnav and the kind of pictures he must be getting
where as all khushi wud be thinking is he having jalebi with salman ji
:P

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#870

man does DM have a lot of work cut out for her after all these two really need so much pushing in the right direction before they do anyhting about their feelings and things like that
wow arnie dude you are getiing jealous and you dont even know about it
and thats the reason why you shouted at khushi and it has nothing to do with raj and simran
so you did make them together huh
wow there sure were some akward situations between them for this breakfast date
and arnie got to see and take in khushi's fragarance that was driving him mad since he hadnt been able to smell them for ages