SS: Of Lemons & Limes # 1 (Chapter 1 - 6)

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chetanahooda

@chetanahooda

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Hey!

Amazing idea for a story, but I have a nagging feelings that ur SS will turn into an FF soon enough...you see we Arshians are a pushy lot..😛😛

I loved how Arnav felt almost compelled to offer her a lift, It gave us a just window to his heart. And the dialogue "I hate strong perfumes" just made me picture a sulky ASR...awesome!

Love!

Chetana

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Tia.0

@Tia.0

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+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Lol... Khushi's smell is haunting Arnav and Arnav's temper is haunting Khushi. As Devi Maiyya would say, Purrr...fect...

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ABCDesiGirl93

@ABCDesiGirl93

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#53

awesome! cont it was really interesting!:)

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Omoraboti

@Omoraboti

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+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: chetanahooda
Hey!

Amazing idea for a story, but I have a naggingfeelingsthat ur SS will turn into an FF soon enough...you see we Arshians are a pushy lot..😛😛

I loved how Arnav felt almost compelled to offer her a lift, It gave us a just window to his heart. And thedialogue"I hate strong perfumes" just made me picture a sulky ASR...awesome!

Love!

Chetana

Hey!

I am happy you found the idea intersting! I have no intention to turn it into an FF though! I am already struggling with one FF and am very poor at frequently updating .. 😳 .. So lets see!

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Omoraboti

@Omoraboti

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+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#55

Thanks girls! Love you for your inspiration! 😊

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*ArShi*

@hetalmkn

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

wow lovely...

i so waiting for the next update...

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devsum

@devsum

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#57

bittersweet memories...which could have happened.

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Reader_Hobby

@Reader_Hobby

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#58

Hey!

I'm actually really glad that you are writing this SS. I've been following your FF, Desire and I love it!

It is really amazing reading your work and I just hope that you continue to write the most wonderful ideas created around Arnav and Khushi 😃.

Please PM me the next update. Thanks!

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--Nishita--

@--Nishita--

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Posted: 12 years ago

#59

Loved this one Farha. Love the way you have described Arnav...that attitude in place, he is so attracted to Khushi yet he never admits it😃. Our KKG not giving any bhaav to this laad governor!! This took me back to the initial days of IPK! I will go through your other work as well...wasnt aware that you write FFs.