SS: Of Lemons & Limes # 1 (Chapter 1 - 6)

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#521

omoraboti,

got lost in the words and feelings and remembered arnav and khushi from the days gone by. beautiful understanding of the two, lovely scenes, read 3 and 4 together. five soon please. thanks so much.

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Coffee

@coffee_beans

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Posted: 12 years ago

#522

Oh wow! I love this SS <33 I like how Khushi is so perfect for Arnav to handle 😆And am definitely glad for the torture she is giving him .. he so deserves to be a possessive jerk who's not able to understand his actions :P
Btw, I wonder if Khushi would be angry too when she comes out to know about La dating Arnav?!

Update soon :)

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arnshi

@arnshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#523

brilliant brilliant brilliant...I loved it.
please pm me when you update

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Omoraboti

@Omoraboti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#524

Originally posted by: Amti4u
Awesome... Beautiful... the best one I had come across... Loved the update sooo muchh...

Love you for this update

Thank you so much for the comment Amrita .. 😊

Love you too for being such an awesome reader .. [:)

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BarunAddictSays

@BarunAddictSays

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Posted: 12 years ago

#525

That was awesome.😊
I loved his restlessness.He is trying to figure out what's wrong with him.She had already started bothering him without any efforts.
The feeling he is having that her fragrance will fade in a matter of some hours is amazing.😊
The way he is trying to reason his behavior towards Khushi is so like him...so Arnav Singh Raizada.😆
But how come Khushi Kumari Gupta would change?She will annoy him & he'll get frustrated on her & his own actions.Its eternal.

I love love love love the way its going.😊
I never want this story to end.😃
Peeleej make it FF☺️

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Omoraboti

@Omoraboti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#526

Originally posted by: multifaceted
Awesome update...liked that you wrote it from Arnav's P-O-V...cant wait to read more..thanks for the PM

Originally posted by: Dreamcatcher
Enjoyed the chapter very much...thanks!

Originally posted by: swat.g
Love the kkg...yayy
M so happyyy.

Originally posted by: Sharaa
awesome update...👍🏼

Poor Arnav...

Thanks girls for keeping me so inspired!! 😊 🤗

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Omoraboti

@Omoraboti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#527

Originally posted by: arkushlove
fabulous update :)
Really liked it...

Khushi is irritating arnav so much with her behaviour :P

Update soon

Originally posted by: tina_1234
amazin part

Originally posted by: LaxshaLOVEArshi
OMG Khushi is soo stubborn man !

Thanks for such beautiful comments, girls! 🤗

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Omoraboti

@Omoraboti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#528

Originally posted by: Prasanna_dhanu
OMG marvelous, I loved Arnav and the frustrated one is even more cute and cheers to Khushi for protecting her honor so securely and dearly awesome :)

Thank you so much dear for taking time comment on my works regularly. 😊

This was the whole point of this update .. love takes time and they are yet to know each other beyond their morning ride. 😊

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Omoraboti

@Omoraboti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#529

Originally posted by: Farwa_Ibrahim
Awesome update loved it... She is giving him tough time... Great... I want pm just letting u know i WANT... Know u said tell me if anyone dont want but m letting u know i want... Do update soon

LOL .. of course, I would PM you dear. I just dont want to bother those who are not interested in this SS. 😊 Just came across your FF. Do PM me when you update too. 😊

Thanks you so much for the comment. 🤗