ArHi OS: In Khushi's Defence*Awarded*

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Aysha

@ayshaomar

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#131

this was superbly written loved it

Amans mum is a cow, worse MIL ever and Aman wants to marry Khushi but isnt sticking up for her at all

and Arnavs shocking outbursts were awesome

The kiss at the end was great bet it gave everyone a mini heart attack hahaa

and please dont hesitate to post your work, honestly it is a joy to read😊

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shalinii173

@shalinii173

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#132

wow very nice os. lovely. Loved the aggressive protective caring Arnav.

and that long kiss was - Awww...☺️

superlike

Edited by shalinii173 - 12 years ago

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riafna

@riafna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#133

Congratulations dear...still you are scared...you are so humble...Once again my hearty wishes 👏🤗👍🏼

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aadyakali

@aadyakali

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#134

Congratulations. You DESERVE it . You are a wonderful writer so far i have read all yr work and an ardent follower of 'Unnamed' I diligently wait for wk-nds for yr updates. You are too good!!!!

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asrcraze

@asrcraze

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#135

Sayeda !!! You have no idea how happy this OS made me feel now !

I thought to lighten my mood I'll read Unnamed...But then decided I'll start with the Winner OS :)

I'm so glad I read this :) 😃

You know how sad I was...

But my bad luck continues...I typed a long comment and posted it from mob and my mobile chose that time to get hanged... 😭

Me logged in from PC again 😉 I'm shameless😉

I just loved this OS hun !

This is the Arnav we all fell in love with...Who would jump in her defence when needed ...

Loved how he seemed to know everything about her...

Loved his dislike for Aman's mother growing with every question she asked...

(Btw I hate her too... If Aman is going to be like this..I hate him too... He may be a good employee but at this rate he'd never make a good husband...Esp to Khushi... P.S: Khushi ASR ki hai :D)

Loved how finally he jumped up and stood In her defence much to the surprise of both their families... 😃

Loved how he said, "You may leave" after placing a long kiss on her forehead... Awww Dreamy

Edited by asrcraze - 12 years ago

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sanaroxx

@sanaroxx

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#136

Aman's mom - eeewww .. I will kick her out ..!!

Aman tooo ??? He thinks if BOSS is right then everything is right ???

He doesnt have a nerve to decide something for himself ???

This is the MAN OF MY DREAMS --- Nooo NOT AMAN .. But the one and Only ARNAV !!! How he simply took Khushi's side knowing her likes and dislikes...!!! Thats a MAN ...!!!

Ending Can NEVER be BEST than This Rasgulla !!!

Thanks for giving us such awesome stories...!!! Not only to you but to Zehra tooo !!!

off to comment on your other works and index tooo !!!