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Maaneet099

@Maaneet099

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Posted: 12 years ago

#751

excuse my sudden appearance but i need to tell you i have been following this story for quite a while now. you know silent reader types.

amazingly convoluted plot line. fitting example of the world around isn't black and white... its always grey.

anyways this update got me to reply :p i see cracks in the dam. it wont be long before it breaks and floods the whole area along. it would interesting to see once the flooding clears away what debris does it leave behind :D

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crazydream

@crazydream

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Posted: 12 years ago

#752

Geet doubtful abt her future.
Sees present as temporary happiness.
Life is till now good wid Nikita to hang
Out wid n Maan to pamper her n take
Decision on his behalf. Geet doesn't
Mind becoz he is always correct.

Dev's entry. He knows abt her more
Than anyone else. Blackmailing her n using
Against Maan. Geet has to listen to him.

I think Maan knows something is wrong n
He will found out himself that's y he didn't
Bother n pressured her much

All d best for ur test.

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kiran_rati

@kiran_rati

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#753

dev😡

nice update

thanx for the pm dear

cont soon

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Romenas

@Oblivion007

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#754

such a flawless update!!!the story is going jst in correspondence with it's title.i'm amzed at the way u described the scenes with total conviction and sincerety!!
i'm soo much waiting to knowcbout the shades of geet.i don't think there's anything wrong with the characterization,if it was written tht she never agreed to dev then it wud have lost the charm,it jst goes with her character tht she will agree to dev,besides she practically had no other option as truly she doesn't know for how many days maan is gnna keep her with him,he has not shown or told her anything which wud steer her otherwise and make her believe him.so it totally justifies.
she has faced a lot of hardships and now is acting to shield herself which has become a basic instinct for her.i truly can't wait how maan will mould her with his love to a new geet who will learn how to love and trust,i hope tht u've planned this only for the future:) not the sady sady thing,bt the change hs to come slowly and gradually.can't wait for the next part.

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sonu4ever

@sonu4ever

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#755

What an update 👏
Flawless writing 😳 👏
Geet got her reality check
Even if she agreed to that creepy dev. Im still confident about maan. 😃
Maan knows more than he shows 😉
Brilliant part. Cant wait for more.