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Tabinda Areeb

@t_areeb

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Posted: 12 years ago

#321

why maan wanted a companion to attend the party?

and does she knows how to dance?

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Anubhuti

@tellyme

Sparkler

+ 18

Posted: 12 years ago

#322

Read all parts in a go

Find it very promising

It has a story to it ..

Maan looks mysterious too

Why did he bring Geet here... I mean shecis not fr these places nd that too when he gets busy with am1 else... What was the purpose

What kind pf relation does he expect from Geet

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supriya anand

@supriyaanand

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#323

loved ur descriptive way of writing...

as of now no characters are clear they r all mysterious

but y does MAAN want GEET..i mean a prostitute????

n he is completely ignoring her after comin to the party or rather i say after meetin DEEPIKA!!!!!!😡😡😡

WAITING FR UR NEXT UPDATE...

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singh24

@singh24

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#324

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Tamalika Basu

@sukklover

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#325

update...😳

keep ing dear...😃

Happy Diwali to all of u Dears...

Happy Bhaidooj...dears

lov,❤️

Tama

NOTE: SORRY FOR THIS TOO SHORT COMMENT AS MY NET IS IT"S CRTICAL CONDITIONAM..don't know when it'll be fixed

NOTE: SOMEONE ASKED ME WHOM FAN I AM...THAT ANS IS ONLY SUMIT KUMKUM & HUSSAIN JUHI..NONE OTHER ANY OF RESENT ON TV..

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Divz

@dazzlingdivz

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#326

showie am not liking ur descriptive way 🤢 but am loving it 😉

it's actually making us go more closer to the update and the parts as wll...just loving the way you writing it...it's kinda a captivative power which u binding here...😃 woop woop u know black magic for sure m confirmed with it now 😆

and about update 😲 that was ohh damn good

love the start so Maan is vulnerable round her 😉 wooppiiess that was amazing 😉

hehehe u showed him to be a typical brother here isnt it trust me all brothers are same 😡

LoLz i loved the shaan n maan convo here

so geet felt out of place and specially after that not so awaited entry of an intruder called deepika 😡

grr hate the fact maan left her for space i wonder why u making my maan like a jerk now a days 😡 n the dance part grrr i dont know abt Geet bt defo am seething in anger how could he??? grrr now to he is gnna burn in anger seeing Shan with Geet but what about he did on Geet...

sint he came with her how could he leave her and enjoy with this deepika thing??? hate him for that