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Vinsh23

@Vinsh23

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Posted: 12 years ago

#281

Yeahhh i became GOLDIE...😃

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Challiya Bitch !! ;) !!

@-BlushaLicious-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#282

Awesome Update !! 😃 !!

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OsheenDGr8

@OsheenDGr8

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#283

Originally posted by: Vinsh23
Yeahhh i became GOLDIE...😃

Congooo darling ⭐️⭐️⭐️

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vrinda22

@vrinda22

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#284

geet feeling something for maan..

if she dances with shaan..maan may get jealous..

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jenny

@ajenn

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#285

Why did Maan brought Geet for this high profile party. Poor should for sure she would be scared and out of space.

Initially I though Maan and Shaan might be some best-est friend. But looks like this two are friend and business enemy as well. They know how to play their game. Loved the way you showed Maan's possessiveness towards Geet when Shaan kissed her hand.

How rude of Maan. He left Geet once Deepika arrive. He should have gone after Geet once he realize she slipped from his hand 😡

So now Geet and Shaan on dance floor. Wonder what going to happen.

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keerthi90

@keerthi90

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#286

This piece of ur writing definitely differs from ur other works...

I simply am loving it a lot...

SO maan took her to a ball...wher she is observing all those rich and fake people...and the difference u made about the rich and poor and the words about geet's life brings in many realities of our world to the fore...there is truth in all those words written there...hmm...

So maan left geet and was dancing away with deepika and shaan is now here to take a chance and geet gave him that chance...

Hoping to get a reaction from maan...Update soon...Waiting for it...

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gbhat

@gbhat

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#287

it was a fab update. your narrative is very good. waiting for the next

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tia

@Tia-AFreeBird

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#288

maanu 😕😕😕
geet y she chose this
i know not so fodly bt wated to know the reason
ye shaan chodo iss khote ko maanu will see him
geet dancing with another man how will maanu react
waiting to know cont soon

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sonu4ever

@sonu4ever

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#289

Im loving this FF 😳
Brilliant concept 👏
Love ur writing style A LOT 👏 👏 👏
Too mysterious. Maan's motives are mysterious. 😕
The story is really gripping 👏
Maan left geet for deepika
Geet feeling out of place. 😭 Yet she felt better than those fake people
Loved ur lines about alcohol, a drink for all people rich or poor its the same.
Shaan coming to the rescue? 😉 Want to see maan's reaction now 😃
Anxiously waiting for the next part 😃

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maaneetmaahi

@maaneetmaahi

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#290

lOVED THE UPDATE DEAR..👏👏
thanks for this long update..
loved ur writing ...👏👏

PS: i love every work of all writers dear..just i told my POV,..can't keep quite na when something comes to ur heart...😆

Edited by maaneetmaahi - 12 years ago

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