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@cocoatree

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Posted: 13 years ago

So beautifully written sunara🤗

just loved it !!😳

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Sunara

@princessunara

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: iisuperhumanii
This was on the end of the nicely written ff's on india-forums. well, my only suggestion is that to refrain form using text language while writing...it's like a pet peeve of mines. It just kind of takes away from the story.

So, you did very well portray Arnav's inner battle and it was done well. Lovely story and surely, do hope to see some of this in tomorrow's episode.

oh i didn't get the first part.. But I will definitely try my best to not use text language when writing stories:-)
thank u 😃

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kooltoad

@kooltoad

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Posted: 13 years ago

HIS BRIDE IS WAITING FOR HIM... I HOPE HE REACHES ON TIME... :)

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Jaya

@pink.lotus

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Posted: 13 years ago

your version of the flashbacks, simply so beautiful it bought tears to my eyes..
excellent writing👏

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207shikha

@207shikha

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Posted: 13 years ago

beautiful beautiful beautiful.!

it really moistened ma eyes.! loved it 😃

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mayabegum

@mayabegum

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Posted: 13 years ago

hope this happens in the show,

nice os, thanks for the pm :)

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Sasha

@sarunsashasingh

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Posted: 13 years ago

Very beautifully written , hope d same thing happens in real!!!!!!!

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claireDD

@claireDD

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Posted: 13 years ago

woah...i really wish this happens...

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ArnavKhushiAT.

@ArnavKhushiAT.

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Posted: 13 years ago

YOU WROTE n I DIDNT even Know :'(

*cries like Khushi *

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ushavizay

@ushavizay

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Posted: 13 years ago

i hope arnav really takes a step like this...fingers crossed...nice os...

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