OS : Change Of Seasons

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Posted: 12 years ago
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What I liked the most about your story is that you made Arnav witty without making any changes to the basic framework of his character. 👍🏼

And when he came looking for Khushi with medicines declaring how she was pregnant with his child I was 😆😆😆

Khushi was happy at the start, then annoyed with her family, then sad because of him, then mad at him and then was back to happy in his arms. Arnav was naughty at the start, then flirty, brooding later, then possessive and happy at the end. The way I see it, quite a few change of seasons 😊

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Masam writes about mausam... Hehehehe 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Okay...I need a minute or two to get over that...It was phenomenal. The way it began was so diferent that I could hardly think the end...but then again you just nailed it as usual😃 Bechara Danial kisse panga lene chala tha...And the way Arnav came up with the iron supplements for Khushi was like cherry on top😆😆
Thanks for the PM Masam.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow! Awesome OS! Loved it! Thanks for the PM!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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how sweet OS, l loved and plz continue soon with the next part if you can. l loved when arnav said that khushi is pregnant to danial. 🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Whatever it was...it was brilliant..loved it..thanks for the pm.
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Fantastic one shot ...Loved it...😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Cute OS! I loved it! Keep writing more :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I just loved it...
I could just go on and on reading it..I was actually sad when it ended...
Loved the way he was teasing Khushi throughout the whole function..The way he took things easily and then finally proposing!
I could imagine Danial's shock when Arnav said that she was pregnant with twins😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This has to be one of the best OSs I have ever read!! Way to go Masam!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Perfection! Throughly enjoyed it! Continue writing like this... :)

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