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What I liked the most about your story is that you made Arnav witty without making any changes to the basic framework of his character. 👍🏼
And when he came looking for Khushi with medicines declaring how she was pregnant with his child I was 😆😆😆
Khushi was happy at the start, then annoyed with her family, then sad because of him, then mad at him and then was back to happy in his arms. Arnav was naughty at the start, then flirty, brooding later, then possessive and happy at the end. The way I see it, quite a few change of seasons 😊
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Masam writes about mausam... Hehehehe 😆