SwaRon OS ~A Game Of Pool~ - Page 6

Originally posted by: marauder

Mujehe bhi pool nahi aata par lagta hai ab shikhna padega who knows kisi din kisi ke saath khelna pad jaaye. 😆...lolz bro yup u should learn how knows when it might come in handy😉😆...I don't know how many times I have told you but no one writes hot and seductive SwaRon OS but still manage to maintain the beauty of SwaRon romance better than you. This OS was another example of that. ...thank you so much u have no idea what it means to me😳...Just awesome work again. BTW dono lade kis baat pe the? I was waiting for the reason but it didn't appeared any where....i myself didn't thought the reason so i didn't mention it..lolz🤣 Aur seriously Tani show ke baad tumhare OS mein bhi SwaRon romance ke beech mein aane lagi 😆...tanni ka ana zaroori tha warna how knows kya ho jata😉

P.S - OS gallery idea is superb. Please do make one with link to all your works. It would be one of my favourite place to remove my diappointments which I constantly get on seeing the current episodes...that is so sweet of u i am working on it...will inshallah open it soon😊

Originally posted by: MagicalShantanu

The Beauty of ur writing is like a Divine Fire . . . . . .I can go on and on Admiring it . . . .😳..thank you

Baz . . . .🤗 can u please guide me a bit to sort out ur Magnificently Mysterious manner of creativity . . 😳. . . seriously girl, I'm really enthralled at the same time astonished to get the glimpse of ur resources of inspiration for coming up with these kinda sooo Strikingly Beautiful concepts . . .

SwaRon POOL Play . . . . . Hayee . . . . . . . . Sharon toh as usual the box full of gigantic sized ego and way huger adorableness . . . .but, ur power pointer is the way u sketch the character Swayam . . . . . . . the proportion of mischief and flirty attitude u make him to be blessed with is just - Sensuous . . . .😉 I love the way he dominates over the Big Bash Ego of our Diva . . . .

and the blushes of Sharon were just like the cherry on the cake . . . . .⭐️ as usual Majestically Penned piece from my Majestic Writer . . . . .👏 ..thank you

Baz, dear . . . Warmhearted Thanks for such " feel blessed " write up . . .and earnest request to provide us the same more often. . . . . as u know , we SwaRon-inans are undergoing starvation these days . . . .

LOVE u . . . . ( I think, u know it 😉 ) . . . . . - Turin ( Shantanu Soul )

Originally posted by: DaShInG_DeViL

.okay now that is a such a big thing for me...i don't think i am even half as good as u have praised me but it means way too much to me so thank you so much😳🤗...you have praised me so much that i am at loss of words to thank you...so Turin thank you from the bottom of my heart for giving me such an inspiring and amazing comment...i have siad it once i am saying it again i am nothing without u guys i write because u all want me to so thank you once again for those kind words.🤗😳

Originally posted by: swaronilicious

You never fail to impress me

You are a BEAUTIFUL writer

God i hate that taani

Nd you had to kill us with the pool just after the bts scene of tannu and KAS playing POOL was uploaded

Love you nd again you didnt pm me thats not fair

Originally posted by: marauder

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Originally posted by: Srishti_SwaRon

Awesome OS Baz.!🤗...thank you so much Shris🤗

Your advance sorry won't work.! I'm still mad at you for calling your work boring.! :P

Oh and before I talk about the OS I want to tell you something.! Next time you write OS's like this, which is almost all the time, give a prior warning of not reading it while others are in the room. There were some parts that made me go wild with laughter and my parents were looking at me like I just turned into a green flat-faced alien or something. And then they ask me why I'm laughing! What am I supposed to tell them. :P...lolz Sris will keep that in mind next time🤣

Now back to the OS, well their fights are almost all the time meaningless. Sharon is one desperate girl, poor thing, Swayam has turned her into a desperate soul. I could almost imagine that expression on Sharon's face when she saw Swayam playing pool with the guys. I love that shocked expression that Sneha gives, its really cute(<3)....yes she looks really adorable

Well Swayam sure knows how to pull Sharon's strings. Smart bwoy, he got Sharon to agree to play a game of pool with him. And Sharon bhi kuch kam nahi, she made sure Swayam would be bowled over in the very beginning. 😆

Phir toh, jo kuch bhi hua better not comment on that. Warna pata nahi kya-kya likhna padega! 😳😆
But that part was awesome too, utna janna kafi hai tere liye. :P😉

Thank you for the PM.

P.S will comment on your SS and FF tomorrow. :)...will be waiting for it😃