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Posted: 13 years ago
So I reserved a post before but I'll just make moi comment here😊

Lovely updates! (That I missed for the past 2 days😃)
In CH10 part 3, I reallly loved Anjali-Arnav scene...Arnav was becoming his old cold self (ASRish style) building up hatred for Garima and snapping at people. Anjali was right was she said that Garima is paying for her deed (even though she is innocent here)...her daughter's marriage is broken, her husband is under operation, and her other daughter has been pushed out of her sasural. What more pain must she suffer to redeem the past?
A quick question here, what the hell is Shyamu upto? His intentions are never good but I am worried for ASR and his family.

In CH11 part 1, I was surprised. I really like this style of writing - from Arnav's perspective. It was soo good to see what this elusive guy thinks and perceives...NK and Manorma's questions were hell as funny😆 But you said the next part would also be from his view so do continue the next part in his perspective.

In CH11 part 2...this is what I wanted to know(the interiors of the haveli and it's importance) and was really looking forward too. Now even I want to have a home like Purani Haveli...it's so well-sketch out. Plus point: It's refreshing to see Anjali remember and recall her childhood incidents with the Dinnu Kaka. N how the caretaker's family dotes on her.
Awww Arnav really does feel he is at home in Purani Haveli. I was smiling the whole time at Akash and NK's antics...first convincing Arnav and then trying to come up with fun ideas...riding the horse around and exploring the dungeons. Oh, and isn't this where the trunk is locked up too? 😉
As for Shashi's operation, I hope something positive come out. Khushi and Payal are soo supportive of their mother and really optimistic. I know realistically it's kinda impossible to treat paralysis but there are miracles haina?

Thanks for all the PMs. Aur, Smitzy I'd suggest to go ahead and write one chapter from Khushi's perspective too. It's a great change and provides insight to the character's minds.


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Posted: 13 years ago
I'm curious to see what's in the Dungeon...A fantastic update.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: smitzy


Hi Segad,

Initially i hadn't given the surgery much thought and just related paralysis to the brain/spine problem. But after reading your comment, I happen to do a little study about this. 😉

Primarily, when the blood supply is cut off to the brain, it results in paralysis. Paralysis is basically when the voluntary motor function of any part of the body stops. Now this blood supply may be cut off due to many reasons i.e. a clot forming in the brain, or a vein bursting (also called an aneurysm), or the blood flow stopping to reach the brain. I believe Shashi had a stroke and one of the many consequences is paralysis because the blood doesn't reach the brain at the time of the stroke.

Now in most of the cases, there is no complete cure for stroke-induced paralysis. But researchers are working on a method to use stem cells in the spinal fluid to try to refresh the damaged nerves. This is still a work in progress. So ya in a way I assumed that our doctors already know how to work on it 😛

hope this helps!

cheers!


Thank you for taking the time to research and respond. It really wasn't necessary. I was willing to give you creative liberties. Just like on Star trek, every experiment works perfectly the first time it is tried.😃

Appreciate your attention to detail as a writer. Not many writers would bother with scientific details.👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
Oo...Abhi Dinu Kaka Aayenge or Bas, then he won't let them go there...Isse pehle, Arnavvv, Kick Down the door...Darwaza Thoro, open it, Kuch bhi, Do something, Jaldi...lol

But I know Arnav...even If Stopwa came and stop him, it will only make him more it will only make him more determinant to find out what's behind that door...Just for the sake of his ego..."No one tells A.S.Raizada what to do and what not to do" and "How dare she?"

If I am wrong, Then NK hain na? NK mere Bhai...Go find some ghosts in that Saloon se Khali Kal-kothri...heHaha... 😉

I am right Ma Lady? 😃 lol Btw, That was fab-awesome as always...can't wait for Arnav to find out what is in that Sandukwa...Stopwa Aka Mr.Snakewa's LoVa lOvA to Kaam se gai, If Arnan found something which proved the truth... Muahaha...😈 lol
Edited by A.Hajnal - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: segad

Thank you for taking the time to research and respond. It really wasn't necessary. I was willing to give you creative liberties. Just like on Star trek, every experiment works perfectly the first time it is tried.😃

Appreciate your attention to detail as a writer. Not many writers would bother with scientific details.👏


haha! thanks a lot dear! 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: fairy_stardust

So I reserved a post before but I'll just make moi comment here😊

Lovely updates! (That I missed for the past 2 days😃)
In CH10 part 3, I reallly loved Anjali-Arnav scene...Arnav was becoming his old cold self (ASRish style) building up hatred for Garima and snapping at people. Anjali was right was she said that Garima is paying for her deed (even though she is innocent here)...her daughter's marriage is broken, her husband is under operation, and her other daughter has been pushed out of her sasural. What more pain must she suffer to redeem the past?
A quick question here, what the hell is Shyamu upto? His intentions are never good but I am worried for ASR and his family.

In CH11 part 1, I was surprised. I really like this style of writing - from Arnav's perspective. It was soo good to see what this elusive guy thinks and perceives...NK and Manorma's questions were hell as funny😆 But you said the next part would also be from his view so do continue the next part in his perspective.

In CH11 part 2...this is what I wanted to know(the interiors of the haveli and it's importance) and was really looking forward too. Now even I want to have a home like Purani Haveli...it's so well-sketch out. Plus point: It's refreshing to see Anjali remember and recall her childhood incidents with the Dinnu Kaka. N how the caretaker's family dotes on her.
Awww Arnav really does feel he is at home in Purani Haveli. I was smiling the whole time at Akash and NK's antics...first convincing Arnav and then trying to come up with fun ideas...riding the horse around and exploring the dungeons. Oh, and isn't this where the trunk is locked up too? 😉
As for Shashi's operation, I hope something positive come out. Khushi and Payal are soo supportive of their mother and really optimistic. I know realistically it's kinda impossible to treat paralysis but there are miracles haina?

Thanks for all the PMs. Aur, Smitzy I'd suggest to go ahead and write one chapter from Khushi's perspective too. It's a great change and provides insight to the character's minds.



Ah my dear, you don't know how elated you have made me by writing this wonderful feedback 🤗

I'm glad I'm able to show Anjali as the character we once used to like. I would have still liked her had they not shown her to be selfish, dumb and extremely immature. So I try to write out of my memory of the way she used to be in reel life.
Shyamu is trying to do some bad business like always. Again, Shyam isn't the dumb villain as he is portrayed in the reel life. He's a lawyer and his degree ain't fake. So his plans will be devious. But I'm not intending for his plans to start working until Arnav has the support of Khushi. So abhi take a deep breath of relief 😉

Purani Haveli.. one of my friends in Lucknow had an ancestral house.. it was BEAUTIFUL!! And I've always been fascinated with old architecture and I love to describe things 😊 However, I really think this would have been an interesting way of bringing the past and actually make Arnav feel differently about the place where he was born.

The scene written in Arnav's POV was done because I was still not in the frame of mind to get back to writing screenplay format after writing the short story Saat phere.. but ya I intend to write a chapter again in a character's POV later. But I won't want to make it too soon because it will lose it's novelty then 😉

thanks again for the lovely comment! Hope you enjoy what is in store 😉

cheers!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: A.Hajnal

Oo...Abhi Dinu Kaka Aayenge or Bas, then he won't let them go there...Isse pehle, Arnavvv, Kick Down the door...Darwaza Thoro, open it, Kuch bhi, Do something, Jaldi...lol

But I know Arnav...even If Stopwa came and stop him, it will only make him more it will only make him more determinant to find out what's behind that door...Just for the sake of his ego..."No one tells A.S.Raizada what to do and what not to do" and "How dare she?"

If I am wrong, Then NK hain na? NK mere Bhai...Go find some ghosts in that Saloon se Khali Kal-kothri...heHaha... 😉

I am right Ma Lady? 😃 lol Btw, That was fab-awesome as always...can't wait for Arnav to find out what is in that Sandukwa...Stopwa Aka Mr.Snakewa's LoVa lOvA to Kaam se gai, If Arnan found something which proved the truth... Muahaha...😈 lol


hahahaa arre yaar, itna pessimistic kaahe ho rahi ho? All ij well chant karo 😆 Ab you have written so many possibilities in your comment that I can't really reveal anything just about yet. But I'm so happy to see you get excited about what's going to happen hehehe

the next update will be very soon. pakka!

cheers!
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Posted: 13 years ago
ooo i wonder whats in the room
curious LOL
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: smitzy


hahahaa arre yaar, itna pessimistic kaahe ho rahi ho? All ij well chant karo 😆 Ab you have written so many possibilities in your comment that I can't really reveal anything just about yet. But I'm so happy to see you get excited about what's going to happen hehehe

the next update will be very soon. pakka!

cheers!


Adat hai, I am kinda Natural born pessimist...!!! 😃 LOL

Hey, So, Are you trying to say Dinu Kaka will let them open the door? They will go in Saloon se Khali Kal-kothri without Stopwa knowing about? Hai la...😲 lol


Haha, I toh think after watching Mr.Snakewa and his LoVa LOvA, I need Anger Management Counselling more then ASR...🤣 lol


You are right, I have to wait for the next part, just like other Mango readers...!!! 😳 LOL
Ohhh, That I am, Can't wait...I am going to go Crazy after reading Arnav going all ASR on

Mr.Snakewa's LoVa LOvA, Hai La, Kitna Mazaa Aaye gaa na...!!!! 🤪 LOL


Aww, Thank you Ma Lady...🤗


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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome hope so kal khotri se Arnav ke past ka kuch mile jisse Khushi aur Arnav sath ho jae

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