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Posted: 12 years ago
Baby Ve, O Baby Veee ...
hahahahaha🤣🤣
can't stop laughing
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ace13

Baby Ve, O Baby Veee ...

hahahahaha🤣🤣
can't stop laughing



Glad you had fun reading it sweetie 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Alrighty...so finally getting around to comment 😃

Firstt let me just... 🤣 😆 🤣
What the hell did I just read? This was the cutest thing EVER!!!!
I don't know why I caught up with it so late... but better late than never, right?

Ashar Singh Raizada should get his own TV show, dammit! He's the DUDE!!! I mean...I fell in love with him right after the first update...and that's saying something...considering he's a new born and all :P

I loved how this FF showed things through a baby's perspective...totally a new thing for me, and a very cute one at that. I love how he always wanted to interrupt his parents rabba-ve moments lol. I loved how he described his father changing his nappies, and I love how he described his mothers fascination for dressing him in bright colours.
And he has a crush on Lav's baby? hahah loved loved loved their Baby ve... 😆 I was like...ROFL (not literally)
No but... my favorite phrase is 'Is halat mai'!!! Okay I literally died laughing each time he mentioned the ladies slipping into 'Is halat mai'

Okay...what else did I love? Hmmm... yes! Oh dear... the conversation Ashar had with his siblings! Shittt... they were the best! I loved Aakash's baby 😆 The way Ashar found similarities between him and Aakash...seriously freakin' hilarious!!!

Lastly...I loved when his parents found his diary Lmao! Like...I don't even want to comment on it and spoil it!

My favorite scene: When Arnav Singh Raizada changed his son's nappy and then our dear Ashar made it ready for change again 🤣 Oh dear... how I would have loved to see that on the show. ASR dealing with Potty Business. Intense!

Okay, I wish I had patiently formed a lovely comment which looked pleasing...but I've clearly failed. But...I hope you get the point. I really did love this FF. Super-hilarious!


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: SmileyStar

Thank Youuu Sooo much everyone who took out time to leave such wonderful comments behind 😳 I just got time to catch up on them 😛 I really wanted to reply individually but my study schedule isn't allowing me to... so I hope you'll all forgive me 😃

@blahblah16, waiting for your comment 😃 i'm so happy that you gave my work a read, I've only read your work on the FF Collab and it was awesome! So I'm really honoured to have you reading my work 😃


Oh well.. wow. Thank you so much. I'm pleasantly surprised at your words 😊

I really loved this FF!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: blahblah16


Alrighty...so finally getting around to comment😃
Firstt let me just...🤣😆🤣What the hell did I just read? This was the cutest thing EVER!!!!
I don't know why I caught up with it so late... but better late than never, right?
Ashar Singh Raizada should get his own TV show, dammit! He's the DUDE!!! I mean...I fell in love with him right after the first update...and that's saying something...considering he's a new born and all :P
I loved how this FF showed things through a baby's perspective...totally a new thing for me, and a very cute one at that. I love how he always wanted to interrupt his parents rabba-ve moments lol. I loved how he described his father changing his nappies, and I love how he described his mothers fascination for dressing him in bright colours.
And he has a crush on Lav's baby? hahah loved loved loved their Baby ve...😆I was like...ROFL (not literally)</font>[/DIV][DIV]
No but... my favorite phrase is 'Is halat mai'!!! Okay I literally died laughing each time he mentioned the ladies slipping into 'Is halat mai'
Okay...what else did I love? Hmmm... yes! Oh dear... the conversation Ashar had with his siblings! Shittt... they were the best! I loved Aakash's baby😆The way Ashar found similarities between him and Aakash...seriously freakin' hilarious!!!
Lastly...I loved when his parents found his diary Lmao! Like...I don't even want to comment on it and spoil it!
My favorite scene: When Arnav Singh Raizada changed his son's nappy and then our dear Ashar made it ready for change again🤣Oh dear... how I would have loved to see that on the show. ASR dealing with Potty Business. Intense!
Okay, I wish I had patiently formed a lovely comment which looked pleasing...but I've clearly failed. But...I hope you get the point. I really did love this FF. Super-hilarious!



If this comment wasn't pleasing then I don't know what is 😃 Aww loved reading your looonnnggg comment! So glad you enjoyed yourself while reading this one 🤗 and your lovely comment has made me grin like an idiot 😆 Thanks hun 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: blahblah16

Oh well.. wow. Thank you so much. I'm pleasantly surprised at your words😊
I really loved this FF!



Thanks 😳 and I'm still catching up on the FF collab. Its taking me ages cos I don't get time to sit and read... Studies arghh 😔
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Posted: 12 years ago
Just how do you do it?
Man, it was so hilarious, I laughed my head off!
Awesome work! 👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg this was absolutely hilarious! !!!

started to read it at my lunch break n cldnt stop laughing my friend at work thought id gone crazy lool
absolutely awesome! !! 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sana_96

Just how do you do it?
Man, it was so hilarious, I laughed my head off!

Awesome work!👏👏



Awww thanks Sana 😳 Pleased to know you enjoyed yourself 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: farha623

omg this was absolutely hilarious! !!!

started to read it at my lunch break n cldnt stop laughing my friend at work thought id gone crazy lool
absolutely awesome! !! 👏



You're already here? 😆 I just sent you the link yesterday!

Glad to hear you enjoyed yourself while reading this 😛 Thanksss 😳

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