Raizada and Sons - Thread 2 - Page 78

oh man... that might just have been my favourite part! that was something else all together.

Originally posted by: vgedin

Beautiful. I don't have another word. Dreamy, so full of love! Kalyaani you keep writing like this, and my future husband is going to have a tough time rising up to my expectations :D I am going to read this one over and over and over and over again.

PS - So theres a part of the "I love you" conversation :D

Beautiful update! Arnav hardly speaks in this update, so his thoughts towards the end that you have put so eloquently are beautiful! Loved it. :)

That was an amazing update!!!
God...this was beautiful!!!:D

loved the update...it was simply magical...

The update was absolutely bewitching (I usually use this adjective on a very few occasions). You take passions to new levels through your writing. The journey of marriage that began with a physical relation whose passion was one sided, finally closed the loop with the acknowledgement of their sacred bond and confession of love; and what better day could it have been other than their anniversary where it had all begun. I truly felt for Arnav during this update. This man though had won Khushi's hand through manipulation tried in multiple ways to win her heart, had been on the verge of losing hope of a better future after months of patience; and finally today was pay back time for his unconditional love. Today was the one day he chose to silently dwell in the bliss of feeling loved by one's partner. I am glad Khushi took the time she needed to realise and confess her love which was absolutely essential given the circumstances under which she got married.

Finally arnav in and around me..

Great update.. A confession by khushi, but more importantly the fact that she sees love for herself in Arnav s eyes, and doesn't want a confession... a perfect anniversary for a beautiful couple..can't believe we have to go back to the world of suraj s and viren s..*sighs*

I can't help but fall a little more in love with your Arnav - he's the perfect combination of sweet, tender, caring, thoughtful, passionate, loving on this vacation. Khushi didn't stand a chance :)
I will say that this couple has certainly come a long way since the couple we met in the first chapter - and it's been a delight to read about their journey. Looking forward to reading about Arnav confessing his love :)

Thanks for the update. The reasoning behind Arnav not verbally acknowledging his love for Kushi seemed so in sync with Arnav's character..I loved it.

Fabulous update...Arnav fulfilled all Khushi's fantasies...Why don't you give Khushi a chance to surprise Arnav before they leave for India...Thanks for the PM