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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update as always! Finally they are having a happy holiday...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow I really feel happy seeing both of them so happy n enjoying this holiday..
Arnav really making her every wish fulfilled ..
He looked at his wife with such indulgence only a man who was desperately in love with his woman was allowed to 😳
The ride was really sexy n enjoyable. You have really shown it nicely. Though i too was little worried for them to ride like this with all distraction. Khusi was really cute asking for food all the time... šŸ˜†
Loved the part.


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Posted: 12 years ago
I was a little, just a teeny bit scared if by chance you know the things Arnav was doing to her went just a little overboard, and they...the bike...anyways.

I shall not deny the fact that ...HARLEY f**kING DAVIDSON...Khushi is so, so lucky. And that too, siting next to your hot as hell husband. Sigh.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely update.
But I was scared of the way they were riding.
I was afraid that something might happen and
was distracted(like Khushi,but for a totally
different reasonšŸ˜†) and couldn't concentrate
on their romance.
And the beginning of the update where Arnav
pulls the duvet and sees naked Khushi and
covers her again...found that funny.
As usual,loved the update.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Very nice update. So glad they are having a romantic holiday.
I notice in both your stories, (this one and P of L) that Khushi is a little immature. In this one she whines some and is in constant opposition to Arnav. She is gradually coming along, but not waking up and whining about not eating reminded me of the old Khushi from earlier chapters. In P of L her approach to not dealing with any feelings just causes more frustration for her and Arnav. Was not criticizing, as these are two of my faves on IF, but will we see some changes in her soon?
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Posted: 12 years ago
this is really amazing update
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Posted: 12 years ago
read the whole thing and instantly fell in love...i was thinking who do u imagine as indira, suraj, viren, bhavna, kbv, krishna? can u plz tel me which actor/actress u imagine as them? i dont kno y i imagine katrina kaif and arjun rampal as indira and arjun...But no man can cheat on someone as gorgeous as katrina so thats out of equation. take care 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
i love this wicked khushi...u r a talented writer...u should seriously think aboUt writing a book about this...love it
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Posted: 12 years ago
very well written...good going...update soon..😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
i love ur writing kalyani...and this FF is my favorite...gr8 update..😃

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