MG OS: LOVE LIFE pt 6,7,8,9/65,66,74,78 jan 10 - Page 41

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: suhaaana

yup true bt har cheez alag h fr aarya nd BG suits to them just mahi fr maaneet

exactly this couple pe yeh dil hai just sounds beautiful
they look lovely in it
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Posted: 12 years ago
Baby i want to c epi again it was sooo gud
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: suhaaana

Baby i want to c epi again it was sooo gud

really itna accha epi tha
now i want to see it
but i cnt kal tak wait karna padega for it to come 😭
or else i will just read written update tday 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi thanks 4 da pms n double fab updates! Maan @ orphange n happy! Geet gt a job bt she is crying! superbly written! update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
mere maanu ke peechey toh sari world ki girls hai
bt maanu ko pana is not so possible
arey its only geets' birth r8 haina😆
geet got job n crying
she is single piece😆😆
lvd it
precap- waiting




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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update

maan is so cute

waiting for next update

thanks for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
geet is crying as she will go to Delhi
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Posted: 12 years ago



so Maan will be going to Darjeeling for project...

he is taking bag with him to return to the girl whom it belong...

waiting for Maan-Geet meeting...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb os
loved it
i read two updates 6 & 7
waiting for precap
thanx for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
LOVE LIFE






PART 8

Mamta: tujhe job mil gayi…kahan…

Geet looked with a baby face and mummered…

Geet: delhi….

Both of them were shocked…that means geet will leave them… they can't even say to her not to pursue what she wants…. But geet will be leaving alone was kind of a shock for both of them….

Mamta: delhi… kaisi job hai geet….. kya karna hoga tujhe….

Geet got excited afterall this was her dream …..

Geet: lecturer mami….. main college me padhaungi…aap jaanti ho wo one of the best college hai…aur main.child psychology padhagungi…geet was excited enthusiastic just like a small child….and going on and on….

For a second her mamaji..mamiji..too get lost in her words…and when her mamaji just recovered from a small shock….he exclaimed…..

Dheeraj: mamta hamari geet college me padhayegi…. Jo abhi khud bachi hai wo child psychology…..it was a shock…

Geet frowned and show her angry facial expressions to both of them…..

Geet: me bachi nahi hun mamaji….. she got up on the bed….on her knees…dekho me badi hun… aur phir abhi job bhi toh karni hai jab itni padhai ki hai…

Mamta: haan..dekhiye kitni badi ho gai hai hamari geet….. bass harkate bacho wali hain…..aur geet abb toh college ki vacations me aaya karegi hamse milne….

There was tinge was sadness in mamta's voice…. Geet was not only her niece but more than her daughter….

Geet got up and came to mamta hoding her from her neck..hugging lightly…..

Geet: aapse kisne kaha ki me akele jaa rahi hun….aap dono ko chodkar …. Aap dono bhi chaloge mere saath…

Mamta: geet hum kaise jaa sakte hain…. Aur phir inki job…yahan hamara ghar hai beta….

Geet: maami..aapko nahi lagta ki ab mamji ko transfer le lena chahiye….. aapko pata hai na ki unhone meri wajah se apni kitni promotions chod di…. Kabhi mera school kabhi college…. Abb phir se mere liye transfer and promotion lelijiye mamaji…..

Dheeraj: geet aise achanak sab nahi hota…aur ye baat hame pehle kyun nahi batayi….

Geet: SURPRISE tha aapke liye…but shock me badal gaya…. Acha agar aap log nahi jaana chate to me yahi job kar lungi but aapko chod ke kahi nahi jaa rahi….

Mamta: geet aisa nahi hota… kitni mehnat ki hai tune…phir delhi me tanu aur keshav bhi hai…wo tera ache se dhayan rakhenge aur nidhi bhi toh hai….

Geet: par aap aur mamaji toh nahi hoge na….bas that's final me nahi jaa rahi delhi…..

Dheeraj looked at geet who was very easily going to lose her dream job..and he doesn't want anything of that sort…. So he assured her…

Dheeraj: geet agar hum delhi aayen toh…

Her eyes lit up with a joy and gleam….

Geet: sachhi…

Dheeraj: haan baba…. Me kal hi transfer ke liye baat karta hun….and rehene ke liye keshav se bhi baat karta hun….

Geet just like a baby gave a bear hug….

Geet: I love you mamaji…abhi me college kati hun certificates ke liye…ho sakta hai they will get me the copies soon…..

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AFTER THREE DAYS

Here maan was with akansha at the sight…everything was almost done..but no progress in akansha's hard work..maan seemed to be least bothered about her…..

It was almost lunch time…and maan had to return the next day…..so he thought to return the bag….. when akansha who planned to spent quality of time with maan…. Suggested…

Akansha: maan….if you don't mind we can have lunch ..here is a very good restraurent here..and then we could explore the place…. I don't have anybody here..so would you accompany me….she asked so sweetly that no one could have denied….

Maan too agreed….

They were sitting akansha was speaking and going on … and maan he was just listening…he was reserved…

Akansha: maan… wont you tell me about your family….

Maan: I am an orphan miss rawat….

Akansha felt bad listening…. But didn't said anything…suddenly maan requested her that he had some work at XYZ school so if she mind going there…..akansha agreed to go…maan had actually thought to handover the certificates to geet's school and will request them to call her and she will collect from there…..

Akansha tried to ask the matter but maan didn't told….

Here geet got a call from her school and she just hurriedly got ready …..didnt even inform at home where she is going……

It was three when she reached..maan had left by then….

The school authorities gave her the parcel that maan had given and she asked of the person who gave the parcel…. The authorities gave a card…. It was just written maan singh khurana and his contact number..geet opened the parcel and was shocked surprised happy and glad and somewhere indebted to the unknown angel who gave her " her mehnat ki kamai…"

Geet on looking at the certificates…quickly asked the PA ..of her principal..where is the person who gave this….

PA answerd" he just left.."

Geet was soo keen to meet him thank him but she unfortunately missed him…..

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Here akansha took maan to local market she it was freezing cold all were drapped in long coats…and geet who was just on cloud naine to get her precious possession ….she thought to buy something for all.even for the small krish… who lives in her neighbourhood….and fortunately geet found krish in market with his mom….

Geet was very happy seeing his best friend…the five year old clinged to geet and geet was more than happy with her friend..she too requested his mother that she will bring krish home in an hour…..

Here geet and krish were roaming … she was seeing some bangles and earings for herself..already had taken gifts for mamaji , mamaiji , krish his favourite toy ….for nidhi ..today she was mre than happy …so it doesn't affect her that : ghar jaakar daanth padh sakti hai…for going without informing…..

She was going when krish nudged her to have thandi thandi kulfi….

Geet's eyes went wide …she tried to say no…

Geet: krish daanth padhegi tujhe bhi aur mujhe bhi..no kulfi…but yes….tera favourite chocolate and haan …. Jo tu kahega but no thanda thanda…

Krish made a face….

Geet: puppy faces wont work on me…

Krish: geetu please….

Geet: okk chal garam garam jalebi khate hain….. no kulfi…..

After having her eating and shopping session with her friend geet was coming when suddenly krish who was holding her hand ran to see something…geet who just saw him…shout to stop him….

And in the process collided with someone falling on him completely…. Maan who was coming after taking things for mansi and abhinav …. Didn't know what happen when something soft touched him and made him to fall…. And now he when recovered from the initial shock got to know that it was the same girl….

Her flicks were covering her face…. Her very consciously removed them to see the blissful sight..she was biting her lips…. Her eyes were closed….maan just wanted to keep her like this for ever…..

When geet got her temporary lost senses back…. She just looked at the person….and her eyes went wide..she immediately got up….and before she could say anything…maan started speaking clearing her doubts knowing miss jagralu sheri wont give him a chance to clarify…..for a second his tough got tied seeing her..she was looking extremely gorgoues , cheecks red he didn't knew whether it was due to cold or anger…. Jeans and a long coat her hair open and a cap…. She was just looking breath taking…..

Maan st: she looks really like a pari…but ye pari jab bhi muh kholti hai tujhe kuch na kuch kehti hai maan…. Isse pehle ye shuru ho ..just clear everything….

Maan: look miss before you start yelling or accusing me let me tell you…I am not at fault…you just came and bumped at me…. It was not my mistake…..

Here maan was giving plain explanations to geet just to prevent himself from her honey dripping words…..

Geet got her senses …

Geet: krish….

She looked around and saw him standing..she immediately got him and scolded him….

Geet: kuch ho jaata toh…. Krish you are a bad boy no more toys for you…..she gave him a fake angry glare…and lifted krish in her arms and came to maan…. Who was shocked seeing her carrying a child….

Maan st: maan she is mother of a child and look at you..you were attracted to a married and mother of a child…. Abhi aakar sunayegi yeh tujhe…

Geet came and in a deep angry voice …..

Geet: I didn't knew it was your habit to bump into girls and specially to me that you were following me….

Maan tried to clarify but geet just left giving him real angry glares…it was actually the forbidden feelings that maan's proximity aroused that she actually wanted to hide…..

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NEXT: last part

Zinda rehne ke liye teri kasam ek mulakaat zaroori hai sanam

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