SwaRon FF-You belong with me :) - Page 10

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Posted: 12 years ago
#91
firstly sorry for repling too late😊
d update is soo sweet & spsly Ananya like dat girl & her tries for Swaron r so sweet hope wo apne brother ki dulhan ko jaldi se relise karvale dat dey r ment to be for each other just loved d update
thanx for PM

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ananya !!!!!!!!!!!!!
love ya !
this was a uber cute update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This was such a cute update.So,Swayam finally accepted that he still loves Sharon.I hope he proposes her soon.Thanks for the PM and pls update soon (:
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: swaronilicious

Ananya !!!!!!!!!!!!!

love ya !
this was a uber cute update

Thanks a lot!!!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Nia-

This was such a cute update.So,Swayam finally accepted that he still loves Sharon.I hope he proposes her soon.Thanks for the PM and pls update soon (:

thanks!!Will try and update asap!!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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waiting next chp..
update sooon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Now officially Ananya rocks. Niceely written chapter. Glad that it is cleared that both are in love with each other. It is just that there is ego clashes. I'm sure it will go away. BTW nicley penned down conversation between Swayam and Ananya. Awesomely shows the brother-sister bond of their's. Looking forward to the next update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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AWESOME update dear... loving ananya's character ...she is playing d cupid for swaron...loved ananya - swayam's bro-sis convo...plz update soon😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I love how Swayam went to Majnu mode when Ananya took Sharon's name but it's so sad that he thinks Sharon doesn't feel the same way about him !! The fact that they both texted Rey the same thing was too cute !! I hope something happens in the next update between this two so that it will be obvious to both of them that the other does love them !!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Part 8

The same day..

Swayam hurriedly went in Ananya's room..Without knocking the door he crash-landed there...

Sw:Ananya...What test were you talking about?

An(in her mind):God!!Did he really call up Rey and ask??Im dead...Think of something fast,Ananya..

Sw:Ananya??Are you sleeping with open eyes?

An:Oh..no..no Swayam...

Sw:Then?Tell me what test were you talking about?

An:Me???I wasn't talking about any test Swayam...Stop imagining things..

Sw:Listen,I don't have an imagination problem...you have a memory loss..Weren't you telling that Sharon was telling something about a test?

An:Hmm...so you remember what Sharon said..??Hmm...Why only Sharon,Swayam??Why not Kriya?Vishakha?

Sw:Ananya..dont change the topic..

An:Ok fine...lets get serious..

Sw:Tell me about the test!!

An:How will I know if there is any test in your class?Now bye..let me study!!

Sw:But...

An:Bye Swayam...Go now!!

Sw:Ok fine..whatever..I don't care..

Swayam went from her room...

On the other hand,Sharon was behaving perfectly like a girl who was totally in love..She was going through his messages again and again, reliving those days when she got to know that he knew her the best..when he trusted her...She had not deleted any of his messages...She loved reading their chats again and again..Sharon had a smile on her face...She could not sleep..She could only think about Swayam..Her dreams were occupied by him..It was not infatuation..It was love, pure love...Sharon was smiling like an idiot when her cell rang..She was shocked on seeing the caller...

She picked up the call and answered...

Sh:Rey!!What the hell!!Its 12.30 and do you know that you are calling a girl at this time of night?

R:I do..

Sh:You are mad..

R:Fine Sharon..but I wanted to talk something else since you were not replying to any of my messages..

Sharon facepalmed when she remembered that her mobile had vibrated several times when she was thinking about Swayam and reading his messages..She did not care to check the unread ones.

R:Now please stop thinking about Swayam..and answer me..

Sh:One second, Why did you say that I am thinking about him??

R:What else can you do?

Sh:Rey..please..I have better things to do..

R:Maybe you do..but thinking about him was the best among all of them..considering the time..at 12.30 a.m.

Sharon blushed.

R:If you are done with your blushing,can I speak..?

Sh:Rey..dont act as if you know me extremely well..There are people who know me far better than you..

R:I know..like Swayam..

Sh:You know what..I am sure that Swayam knows me better than you do..

R:I know Sharon..boyfriend comes above best friend..

Sh:REY!!

R:Ok ok sorry..Now tell me..why did you message me asking if there is any test tomorrow?

Sh:Nothing Rey..A misconception...

R:Actually Swayam sent me the same message..

Sh:Did he?

R:Yup..he did..Not a word different..

Sharon smiled again.

Sh:Ok Rey..I am sleepy now..Will meet you tomorrow in school..Good night..

R:Good night Sharon..

And he disconnected the call..

The next day in school..

Sharon entered the class.Swayam was standing in front of her..Before Sharon could say anything,Swayam didn't pay attention to her and started talking to Rey..

Sh(innervoice):Whats up with Swayam?Is he okay?

She went and sat in her place.

Time flew and finally it was recess...

Sharon was upset about the fact that Swayam was still behaving coldly with her.Thats when Ananya entered the class...

Sh:Ananya!!Thank god!!You are here..

Ananya looked at Sharon and her impassive face.She sensed that Sharon was relieved on seeing her...

An:Sharon..what happened?

Sh:You are not angry right?

An:No!!I am not..Tell me what happened...

Sh:Promise me that you wont snap at me..

An:Ok promised..Now tell me what happened..

Sh:Actually Ananya..whatever you said yesterday was true..

An:What did I say?

Sh:Arey..dont you remember that yesterday...

At the same time,Swayam saw Ananya and came to talk to her..He didn't realize that Sharon was there too since she had her back faced to him.

Sw:Ananya..

Sharon turned to look at him..Ananya looked at him too..Swayam realized that Sharon was there too..And that was it..Sharon continued to stare Swayam...Swayam too...Both were staring each other..He was looking in her hazel eyes and she at his chocolate brown orbs..It seemed as if they were talking through their eyes..She was asking him the reason for being a cold person to which he did not respond and broke the trance..

An:What happened Swayam???

Sw:Nothing..I am not feeling well..I'll talk to you at home..

An:Ok..

Just then the bell rang..

An:Bye Sharon..Take care..

Sharon just nodded her head in dismay...

Ananya went from there and Sharon turned her head to look at Swayam.Swayam just gave her a glance and left..

On the other hand Ananya was pondering over Sharon's words..

An(monologue):Yesterday?I talked to Swayam..Rey..and Sharon too..Wait a minute..Did she refer to the time when both of us had gone for a walk??Love??OMG!!I told her that she loves him!!Maybe she realized it..Amazing!!Splendid work Ananya!!!Sharon Rai Prakash has realized that she loves Swayam!!!Swayam,brother..I have a terrific news for you!!Now he will definitely propose her..!!I am sure!!!I rock!!!Good job,Ananya-the cupid!!

So this was part 8!!Sorry...I didnt get time to write a big update!!Please do comment and leave your likes..Criticism is welcomed!!

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