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sofiaroth

@sofiaroth

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

loved it!! its almost perfect:) just a little surprized by arnav's reaction considering the sort of person he is.

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Peppy

@darkangel93

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

this was BLOODY brilliant!!!!!!! i loved it!!!!!!!! but i really really hope this doesn't come true!!!!!! i wont be able to bear it!!!!!!!!! but omg what an AMAZING os!!!!!!! 👏

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Cetronia

@Cetronia

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Very beautifully written but left a knot in my throat...😭

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Kalyaani B Rao

@Kalyaani

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Heaven help us…I just wrote a mushy one and now I get to read this….mine pales in front of your heart wrenching one shot. I don't know if I am allowed to feel this way, but I did like this. It is well written, no doubt but the true essence of the story stays firm. Their fates are at war, each and every time we see a glimmer of hope something happens to over throw it.

I quit watching the show, it was not easy on my nerves, the constant yo-yoing but the forum gives me some hope. In words I find a better Arnav and Khushi.

We have people like you to thank for that.

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Appu

@expectappu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

OMG...that was painful...yet beautiful...the angst, the suffering...everything was so vivid...I had tears in my eyes by the end of it...great writing ya!!! keep it up...👍🏼