SwaRon ff :Unconditional Love..updated ch10 : pg78 - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
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I was certain I was about to fall,until a strong hand caught me,until I regained my balance.I looked up at the person I had bumped into "Mind where you are going?"I hissed as I looked up at a pair of chocolate brown eyes.They pierced the dark and almost seemed to light up the light,but I was not impressed."you nearly knocked me over".He raised an eyebrow at me and smiled cheekily,exposing his dimples.
"I am sorry ,babes",he chuckled while he looked up at me and down.What is wrong with this guy,I thought he nearly knocked me over and now he is checking me out...What a player!
for some reason this infuriated me
Don't call me babes and do not check me out,I snapped at him ,hoping to wipe the smile off his face.But my attempt was miserable and his smile just grew wider.
"you know your face will fall off if u smile any wider"?I tried again..
He shook his head and ignored my attempts at insulting him.
"so what's a pretty girl like you doing out so late alone"?
Edited by cuteswayu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
He tilted his head to the side to continue his visual exploration of me
"none of your business"
I tried to sound as cold as possible.But again he looked amused,rather than insulted or annoyed.
"need a ride?"
"No, especially not from you"
"Do you realize who I am?"
He wondered finally starting to sound annoyed
yeah,I am aware that you are Swayam Shekhawat,but honestly I couldn't care less
I was tired of arguing with him.So I walked away leaving him with a bewildered look at his face.Did he really think I would care about who he was? Well I don't .As I walked away I realized Sam was going to kill me when i will tell him,who I had just ignored.
**Swayam's pov**

Did a girl just walked from me without screaming,fainting or even fangirling?
This hadn't happened to me in quite a while,and it took me a few seconds to recover from the shock and register what had happened.She was so different from the many girls I met on a regular basis.
Edited by cuteswayu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I looked at her retreating back and couldn't help but smile.She had gotten so pissed When I checked her out.But I just couldn't help myself,her long wavy hair,big greenish eyes and rosy plump lips caught my eye,the moment she stumbled into my chest.
She was hot .But her attitude had surely been what caught my attention.For the first time in years,a girl had snapped at me,uncaring of who I was,how intriguing.
I got home and let myself in,knowing that rey would be with kriya and not wanting to disturb them,I tiptoed in the living room and headed to my room
As I stripped out of my clothes and preapared to go to bed,I thought of the hot girl,realizing that I didn't even know her name.I wish I could see her again,but I realized how low the chances of that happening were.I wanted to make her change her mind about me.I was not used to rejection and I was not going to be okay with the way she had snapped at me.The girl might have been stubborn,but she was also hot!
I thought as I slipped into bed.
Edited by cuteswayu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I pulled her closer to my chest as we kissed hungrily and she tangled her fingers in my hair.It had started off with a gentle kiss but I couldn't help but want more.I moved my lips along her jawline and down her neck.She moaned a little smile spread on my lips.She started unbuttoning my shirt and my hand moved towards her back to unzip her dress..


so guys how was it?
boring..super boring..?
however it was!
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Nisha
Edited by cuteswayu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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😛 nyc update...!!! 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nisha Nisha my dear that was a perfect start one would can give to the story...

You were absolutely stunning with the first part of sharon description and how she was fed after a long tiring day. on the other hand she snaps into swayam who is very much chilled out and helps her from falling down.. i can imagine how cute it would have looked...
and than sharon going to the arrogant mood and tries to avoid swayam and shouts at him and leaves from there. sharon the diva was perfectly put on there.
and man the killer thing came there in the swayam pov where he thought after many days some girl had behaved with him in this way. and instead of being hurt he enjoyed that he liked the green eyes of sharon and was lost in that. and he just fell from sharon in the first meeting. but the way you described him thinking was super cute...
but wait what was that in the end...you stoped at an intimate scene wow...clif hanger diya bhi to aisa...badi naughty hai tu to yar...
thanks for pm.. loved the start...
Regards
Pratik
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
hey Nisha ...

swthrt ...AWESOME 1st part...m loving this hottie swayam...and sharon's attitide was bang on ...


What is wrong with this guy,I thought he nearly knocked me over and now he is checking me out...What a player!😆
"you know your face will fall off if u smile any wider"?I tried again..

This Swayam is so used to girls falling for him...he can't take sharon's indifferent attitude towards him...

Did a girl just walked from me without screaming,fainting or even fangirling?😆

I am already loving this FF...will love to see this equation to change into love...n the last few lines ...wat was that 😳...that was hot...as u said its secret ..will wait for the secret to be revealed... .update soon ...jaldi jaldi 😛




Edited by dips098 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice start and I loved the way Sharon just shoved him off even though she found him attractive !! And Swayam really found that surprising and was more intrigued by her cause of that !! I didn't get the last part though, was it Swayam's dream or a precap to the next update ?? I guess I'll know better when you update the next chapter !!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
Interesting start of the story. The character of Swayam and Sharon are quite interestingly established. Swayam sort of casanova and Sharon head strong girl. Now that's interesting combo. Nicely penned interaction between the two. Waiting to read the next upate.
P.S - Promo was just awesome. Was it a dream or reality?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nish meri humdum meri dosth🤗
what a start yaar, sharon in full on diva mode good good i like it.Swayam ye banda tho muje maar dalega he Going home swayam is
thinking of sharon only. Nish tere jaise ye be sab se sweet and cute hai. A fab update yaar, and plz continue fast

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