Mayur Os-Ms.Gawky&Mr.Crummy Last Prt,Pg-19 - Page 15

Originally posted by: mayu-nups

niceee

Originally posted by: SujaLuvsMayur

beautiful ending shaffy.

finally they become one ... very nice... very sweet.

i think, u should write more mayur ss.

waiting for ur new one.

thanks for the pm.

Originally posted by: -Anila-

Awesome Ending SIS..

i loved it sooo much!

i wish ke kuch aur part hotey...

bt it was a Treat to read u write on MN...

i loved this story

it was so sweet n cute

n Now as u have started writing i want u to write more n moreee n MN plzzz

n m already waiting for ur next MayUr SS

do write moreee asap! n pm me for sure 😉

loved it lodsss

love u lodsss SIS...🤗🤗🤗

Originally posted by: Faria.

awww its beautiful ending shay
really very nice
par itna jaldi he kyun khatam kar di??;(

anyway waiting for ur new FF
yes this time FF-oki???

Originally posted by: Maria.

aww that was a cute yet beautiful ending

Mayur were so adorable.

well written

do write more.

Originally posted by: Roses-khushi

nice update di

Originally posted by: Roses-khushi

nice update

Originally posted by: gopi06

lovely story
thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: --Ruchi--

Finally read all the parts...very nice.

I like the story and ur writing style...though u ended it very fast.

write more on MN and do PM me,would love to read.😊