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Posted: 12 years ago
Brilliant update. Waiting to read next part.
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*CHAPTER 11* {THERE ARE THREE PARTS SO CONTINUE READING DOWN}
PART I
Arnav walked to the table and said emotionlessly. "Khushi needs to eat something."
Payal nodded, and putting the breakfast in a tray, she headed upstairs.
Anjali looked at Arnav carefully, trying to penetrate through his mask. She could see tears in his eyes, and she wished she could pity him, but somehow, after yesterday, the only person she felt pity for was Khushiji. She got up from the table, excusing herself and headed to Khushi's room.
"Khushi, please eat." she heard Payal pleading, and walked faster.
She saw Payal, trying to get Khushi to eat something, who was sitting against the bed-post, with her hands curled in her lap, and staring at them. Her eyes ran up and down her bruised skin and she ignored Payal completely.
Payal sighed, and looked helplessly at Anjali. Anjali pursed her lips. "Don't worry Payalji. He has brought her to this, and he better bring her out of this..."
Anjali knew Arnav would try to...In fact, he BETTER try to AND succeed...
-Two Days Later-
Everyone was in the hospital, excepting Arnav who was in his office. Anjali looked at the doctor who had just walked out. "Sir, Khushiji-"
"Don't worry Mrs Jha, I-"
Anjali cut him off. "Raizada. Ms Raizada."
"Well, Ms Raizada, she will be alright, but you HAVE to get her to eat something..."
Everyone had crowded around now. Manroma spoke up. "But Daaktar Saab, Phatti Sadi Kuchh be eatwa naahi karat hai. Note at allj! Bhen (when) Khoon Bhari Taang try karat hai na, oo bahut he lase (less) eatiya rahi. Oo toh JALEBI bhi naahi khawat hai!"
"Look, I don't know what you do. But please understand the situation. She hasn't eaten properly for nearly two days, so she OBVIOUSLY got exhausted and fell unconcsious."
Payal sighed. "She REFUSES to eat..."
"At present we can handle the situation for a few days. We'll keep her on saline injections, but this cannot go on forever." Saying that, the doctor walked out, leaving the Raizada clan worried.

-That Evening-
When Arnav was told what happened when he got home, he got real mad. "Why didn't anyone find the need to tell me!" he said, and not waiting for an answer, flew upstairs. In his room, he saw Khushi lying on the bed, a sight he had been seeing for the last two days. He saw that her hand was connected to tube and she was being injected with saline. Her eyes were closed, but he knew she was awake.
He slowly walked to her and whispered. "I know you are awake ...Don't do this to yourself Khushi..." he plead.
Khushi froze as she felt her fingers caress her hair lightly. She saw images of her distraught mother; she hears the echo of Buaji's slap and felt the painful heat on her cheeks, and could hear her heart breaking and finally, found the strength to break her silence. "Why did you marry me?" she asked, unable to control herself any longer. Somewhere, inside, she still hoped that Shyam had been lying.
Arnav Singh Raizada, for the first time, could not answer her. He knew what she wanted him to say, but he did not want to lie to her anymore. He could see her eyes filling with tears again, and she blinked them away. "TELL ME!" She said louder. "Why?" she asked again, trying to hold his gaze; but he wouldn't...He COULDN'T.
Khushi knew the Shyam was right, the minute Arnav silently refused to meet her eyes. But still, inside her heart, she wished...she hoped Arnav would say something else... Would say that because he loved her, but there was a nagging contradiction that if he had loved her, it wouldn't have been for six months...it wouldn't have been on basis of blackmail...
"Khushi, I-"
The guilt in his voice, was too hard to miss. The guilt confirmed her fears. The guilt broke her... She stried to hit him, but winced in pain. Instead she just yelled at him, or atleast tried to. "WHY! WHY! WHY did you play with my feelings so much! Why! You took away my family from me..." With each word, her voice was becoming weaker.
Arnav immediately said, "Khushi, you are weak, lets talk later. You need to relax...Please?"
"WHY! Why do you even care! This is nothing given how much you hurt my feelings and broke my dreams and-" She tried to get up, and sreamed with pain as the needle in her arm sent ripples of pain shooting across her hand.
Not knowing what to do, he leaned downward and hugged her, pushing her body tightly against his. "I was going to tell you today morning, but...I am sorry Khushi. I am so sorry... I saw you hugging him on the terrace, and I-"
Khushi did not hug him back. She struggled against him, trying to pull away from him. "That man, has harassed me for months! The only reason I kept quiet was for YOUR DI!!!" she said, atleast TRIED to. Most of her words were incoherent, drowned in her sobs.
He pulled her to him again, as her sobs wracked her entire body. He could feel his shirt soaking with her tears, and every drop pierced his heart a million times; he couldn't bear to see her cry, and it hurt him even more that he was the cause of her tears.
"Why didn't you ask me! Once...Just once... I would have told you... You gave me false hopes and broke my dreams...WHY!" she said, her voice hoarse from crying.
"Khushi, I am sorry. But I just couldn't take it... I-I...You know how I am when I get angry... Please Khushi, forgive me." he plead.
Few moments passed. Khushi realized she was in his arms, and pushed him away again falling against the pillow. "Why. WHY should I forgive you..." She said, looking at him expressionlessly. "Give me ONE GOOD reason, why should I forgive you."
He stood in silence for a few seconds. Then locking his gaze with hers, he replied, "Isn't the fact that I love you reason enough?"
{SCROLL DOWN FOR PART II )
Edited by Dynamix215 - 12 years ago
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PART II
"Isn't the fact that I love you reason enough?"
Khushi stared at him, with wide tear-filled eyes, unsure whether she had heard him right.
"Yes. I am sorry for everything Khushi. But... I love you. I did when we married too, but anger dominated over my love..." he said softly. Arnav looked at Khushi for a long time, defeated. It was a lost battle for him, and he knew that she was broken beyond repair now. "I love you Khushi." he whispered, preparing himself to lose her forever. Tomorrow, he would set her free from the contract. She looked back at him, confusion writ on her face.
He tried to stand up, and turned around to see Khushi holding his hand. He looked up to see her staring at him with her hazel eyes, which expressed mild confusion and joy. "Don't go..." she said softly.
Overwhelmed with joy, Arnav turned back and hugged her tightly, and touched her lips softly with his. "I will never leave you Khushi... Never."
He felt her smile against his lips, and he kissed her, letting himself get lost in her flavour...
He pulled away, and said again. "I am sorry Khushi...For everything...I already talked to your family and-"
Khushi looked at him surprised. "What?"
"I told them everything... They are ready to forgive you. Please forgive me..." he said again, desperate to hear her say she had forgiven.
Khushi smiled in surprise. "Thank you. And I already HAVE forgiven you. I don't think I can be angry with you for long even if I want to..."
"Khushi? I am extending our contract..." he said "From six months, to forever..."
"I gladly accept." she whispered.
"I love you Khushi..." he said, looking into her eyes, trying to convey everything his heart wanted to say through his eyes.
"I know..." Khushi said. Hugging him, she said, "I love you too Arnavji..."
Remembering Holi, Arnav smiled and said, "I know..."
They were locked in each others embrace for the rest of the night...
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Edited by Dynamix215 - 12 years ago
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PART III
-Six Months Later-
The atmosphere at RM was cheerful. Five months back, Arnav and Khushi had gotten married with all the proper rituals. The wedding was grand, and the whole world knew Khushi was Arnav Singh Raizada's wife.
Anjali's due date was tomorrow (yeah...In this, her delivery is peaceful...Not premature delivery and all...) Anjali was all smiles. Everyone was preparing to take Anjali to the hospital. Her gyno doc had advised that she better be admitted a day before just in case of early labor pains, so that she could be monitored and would be under proper care.
Khushi was back to being her usual cheerful self and was helping Anjali pack few essentials. The Guptas were at RM, chit chatting happpily with the Raizadas. On the whole, it was all very calm.
-An Hour Later at the Hospital-
"Di, are you comfortable?" Arnav asked for the hundredth time, as Anjali shifted in her bed at the hospital to find a comfortable position to rest in.
Anjali rolled her eyes. "Yes!"
Soon, everyone had gathered around Anjali and were chatting away with her. Nani and Khushi stayed with Anjali for that evening.
-Next Day-
Everyone was at the hospital. Anjali had begun experiencing labor pains and had begun to scream. She held on to Khushi's hand tightly, as doctors shifted her to another room. The doctor had said that Anjali was healthy enough to deliver the baby normally without having to undergo Caesarian surgery.
Arnav ran his fingers through his hair as he paced the length of the corridor, with Khushi running behind him. "Arnavji, sit down. Relax! Doctor said that Di would be fine..."
Arnav nodded. "Yes. Yes. Di will be okay..." he said, and sat down, with Khushi next to him.
Sometime later, the doctor came out smiling. "Congrats. Ma and child are both hale and hearty...And it's a girl."
Everyone smiled and cheered. Nani smiled through tears and Arnav looked at Khushi and said, "I am going to be Mama!" Then he turned to Khushi and whispered "I want to be a Papa too..."
Khushi blushed, and nodded once. "I need to tell you something..."
Arnav waited, looking at his wife expectantly.
"I fainted last week at home and-"
"You what! Why didn't you tell me..." Arnav asked, annoyed.
"Well, Di was with me and-"
"Di knows?" he asked again.
"Yes and-" Khushi said.
"Why didn't she tell me!?" he asked crossly.
"I wanted it to be a surprise and-"
"Well, have you seen the doctor what did she say!" Arnav asked.
Khushi frowned at him. "Can you please NOT interrupt me so many times?"
"Ok ok. Sorry."
"The doctor gave me some supplements and said so far, everything is fine and that I am one month pregnant..." Khushi smiled.
Arnav, not knowing how to convey what he felt, hugged Khushi again and kissed her softly on the lips.
Feeling really ecstatic, he wrapped hs right arm around Khushi as she rested her head on his shoulder, sighing. "So much has changed..."
"...for the good. I am loving the changes." Arnav whispered.
She cuddled closer to him, and sighed in contentment. "Now we are going to be a complete family... Three of us..."
"Three?!" Arnav asked, teasingly.
"Yes. You, me and our little child..." Khushi said.
"Do you want only one child...I know I want more..." Arnav said, smirking.
She looked at him in surprise. Though there was a mishcievous smile on his face, she could see the seriousness in his eyes.
Saying nothing, she just stayed wrapped in his arms as both of them dreamt of a beautiful future of a wonderful family...

Finally, no hatred was left in their relationship...It was pure, pious and passionate, like fire...
So guys... That was it... *phew* planned on writing six maximum, but reached 11... Haha... Thanks for all you support, comments and encouragement... Its LE MOTIVATING FACTORE for me... :)
AND MOST IMPORTANTLY, I wanted to know whether you guys think the title to this FF is appropriate enough!
I did not acknowledge her anywhere, but made it happen in such a way that Lakshmi's small actions led to big things... I will be very grateful if you can tell me about this too... :)
So, Do you guys want an epilogue to this...? I wanted to write one, but didn't know WHAT to write the epilogue about... So I will write an epilogue if you guys can suggest something? I will take all your ideas and present a khichdi epilogue to y'all... ;)
Edited by Dynamix215 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awww..this couple is adorable..
loved it..
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Posted: 12 years ago
AHHH, Happy Ending
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Posted: 12 years ago
*ahem* suggestions for epilogue IF you guys want one?! :/
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Posted: 12 years ago
how about in the epilogue a bit on the children of anji and arhi bonding or somethinh like that
or future like a leap and how the raizada family is doing
wow didnt think a happy ending would be possible but it did and thank god for that right
that sure was something to see that all was well in the end
cheers for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Woah.. I didnt realise i was holding a breath till she said love you too lool.. Greaaat ending.. I sooo want an epilogueee.. Plllzz give us an epilogue like 5 years later lol. :P
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome ending
all's well between the two
please write an epilogue
thanx for the pm

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