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Dynamix215

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Posted: 12 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: Archana89

I will make my presence known dear...!!!will comment after every update..and like too..k???😊

LOL i am not THAT demanding... kabhi kabhi comment kiya karo bas :) just comment once in a whiel

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saritha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#102

omg i just saw it!! wil read n comment later!! thanks for the pm huggs!!
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nice!! i so wanted arnav to know tat khushi said yes to shyam because of him!! you are revisiting the past n correcting all that..wat went wrong!!😃
yaar very short but a good one... but i really hope shyam has nothin to do with wat happnd to khushi!!😲
👏next time u ll write a lengthy one hopefully😳

Edited by saaruipk - 12 years ago

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jenshad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#103

OMFGGG, Shyam Did This ; O Ohh God, See Arnav You Did Not Trust Her & Destroyed Her Innocent Soul Completely :( 💔 You Were Too Late !! How Will She Live Now ?! Maybe She Is In Shock NOOOWWW :(( Please Update Soon As This Was TOOO Shorttt 🥺 Will We Get Flashbacks Of What Shyam Did To Her In Her POV ?! Maybe In Her Nightmares As She Will Not Be Normal After This For Sure ! 🥺 & Do The Family Know About Shyam's Reality Now Or Will Shyam Be In Front Of Khushi All The Time & She Will Not Be Able To Come OUT From Her Fear ?! ; O I Have A Feeling That The Family Was Not At Home When This Happened & They Don't The Reality Of Shyam, WHYYY Will He Do This When He Knows That The Family Is At Home ?! And Now Khushi Will Bot Be Able To Tell, I Hope Arnav Gets To Know, Maybe If Khushi Starts To Act Different Whenever Shyam Comes In Front Of Her 😳

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Dynamix215

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Posted: 12 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: saaruipk
omg i just saw it!! wil read n comment later!! thanks for the pm huggs!!
***** edited!!
nice!! i so wanted arnav to know tat khushi said yes to shyam because of him!! you are revisiting the past n correcting all that..wat went wrong!!😃
yaar very short but a good one... but i really hope shyam has nothin to do with wat happnd to khushi!!😲
👏next time u ll write a lengthy one hopefully😳

sorry, but yeah... Shyam is responsible!!!!

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Dynamix215

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Posted: 12 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: -Tintin.
OMFGGG, Shyam Did This ; O Ohh God, See Arnav You Did Not Trust Her & Destroyed Her Innocent Soul Completely :( 💔 You Were Too Late !! How Will She Live Now ?! Maybe She Is In Shock NOOOWWW :(( Please Update Soon As This Was TOOO Shorttt 🥺 Will We Get Flashbacks Of What Shyam Did To Her In Her POV ?! Maybe In Her Nightmares As She Will Not Be Normal After This For Sure ! 🥺 & Do The Family Know About Shyam's Reality Now Or Will Shyam Be In Front Of Khushi All The Time & She Will Not Be Able To Come OUT From Her Fear ?! ; O I Have A Feeling That The Family Was Not At Home When This Happened & They Don't The Reality Of Shyam, WHYYY Will He Do This When He Knows That The Family Is At Home ?! And Now Khushi Will Bot Be Able To Tell, I Hope Arnav Gets To Know, Maybe If Khushi Starts To Act Different Whenever Shyam Comes In Front Of Her 😳

nyah...im not gonna drag it THAT much... SOMEONE DID see wat happend and yes...the next part will reveal flashback, of what happened...

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jenshad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#106

NOOO, Don't Rush It ;) & Do Update SOOONNN Pleashhh 😳

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Devika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#107

Oh no! What happened to Khushi?😔

did the snake do it?😡

pleaseee update soon

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Dynamix215

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Posted: 12 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: -Tintin.
NOOO, Don't Rush It ;) & Do Update SOOONNN Pleashhh😳

i wont b able 2 stretch it longer. As i said, someone DID see them and so shyam ka khel khatam! As b4, there will b 11 chapters with 11 having part a and part b. And IF u guys want, an epilogue...

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jenshad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#109

Okay ;) But Please Do Not Rush With The Progression Of Khushi's Health Or Shock 🤗

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Dynamix215

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Posted: 12 years ago

#110

Originally posted by: -Tintin.
Okay ;) But Please Do Not Rush With The Progression Of Khushi's Health Or Shock 🤗

um, okay. But khushi's bad health gonna be only in one chapter... :/ i wont be able to adjust more than that cuz actually, the whole thing is already typed... :(