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fffan123

@fffan123

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Ooh! This was really awesome. Loved it! The way ARHI understand each other was pictured really well.

Edited by fffan123 - 12 years ago

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nancynair

@nancynair

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Wooh, Smita was missing your wonderful OS's.

Nice one this as always

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Dalmuthuya

@Dalmuthuya

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Of course you would come with a beautiful game, figure out the deep reason behind it and give us this beautiful Os! Brilliant! :)

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rulama

@rulama

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Smita,

Trust you to complete the unfinished scene. Hope they show us the same tomorrow.

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Jaya

@pink.lotus

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

wow! that is one of the literally breath-taking stories out there.. literally my chest compressed and held my breath without my permission.. you write these two so well smita, 👏
gorgeous scene!

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Filmyshilmy

@dennisdmenace

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

nothing can be better than this...not even a kiss...

you are a rockstar... 👏👏👏👏

Edited by mouramen - 12 years ago

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Pavithra

@alicepuppy

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

i would say u r a best writer...i hav read all ur os...it was awesome:)

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arnshi

@arnshi

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Lovely and so deep...so wish it to happen

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ArnieBoyBarun

@ArnieBoyBarun

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#29

Really a good one. Ho, i have no words.

1. "Because I was away from your sight for a few moments, right?"

2. "Because you couldn't see me with your eyes..."

3. "You couldn't see me. But you sensed me." "Every time.

4. You knew where I was all the time even though you couldn't see me with your eyes."

these are the highlights of your story. Beautifully written. All the emotions were proportionate.

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MissAsian

@MissAsian

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#30

Did Arnav's nose soon turn pink 😳
Lol awesome OS :)

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