ARHI FF: Master Class: Thread 3

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PrInCeSs_dIVa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

CoNgRaTuLaTiOnS !!!!

New thread nanina...way to go girl..

god bless yhu...
yhu are a wonderful writer : )

luv yhu lots and waiting fw yhur next update hun 😉

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aadyakali

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Well done and congrats for the third thread. This chapter was firebolt...and Arnav selflessly trying to help Khushi is commandable... and i can totally relate to Khushi... to realise the power of ASR and the international persona anybody would freak out. loved the way Arnav is handling the issue though reading it i could feel a fear building up in the pit of my stomach!!!! the Arnav/ASR characyter reminds me of Kit kat (!!!!) only here it is chocolate coated steel!!!!!Than you.

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varsha komuravelli

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

awesomee updateee...

this khush is really sensitiveee...

afraid of losing him aww so cutee😳

update soon

thnx 4 pm😃

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magss24

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

congrats on your new thread...the update was amazing...waiting for khushi's reaction...

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GoldenEyes

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

congrats on 3rd thread!

wow easy arnav! but i'm glad he is trying to make khushi talk!

great update! 😊

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ashred12

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

congrats on new thread...
poor khushi...more pressure !!

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vittoriA Giardano

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Hi naina;

First, congratulations on reaching thread three. Next, we are a big family of obsessed Kushi and Arnav fans, aren't we?

And last, but not least, Masterclass. Arghh! Why does Kushi always get the short end of the stick? So now, he's blackmailing her into taking the job (which she should have in the first place anyway!) and also blatantly pointing out her stupidity. He's in charge and calling all the shots! She should call his bluff and make him suffer! So what if he is the great ASR, he's putty in her hands and she should take advantage of that. She needs some confidence. Can you give her that?? Please? Pretty please?? Oh! I'm sooo mad at him. Like he can turn his feelings on and off. I know, I know he's doing it for her own good, she needs to focus on Jalebi Junction - she's worked hard for it after all - but he doesn't have to be such a brute about it! She really should call his bluff. And make him stew for a bit. She should take the job and tell him to bugger off. Then he can do some pursuing...OK here I go again telling you what to do in your story!! (Haha! The CVs have the same problem in reel life with the Forum!!) I guess I really should let you write your story. It is, after all soo much better than reel life!!

Thanks for the update, you know I aways look forward to your stories.😃😃

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mssj

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

hey,

that was an amazing update :D

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207shikha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#19

first of all a hearty congratulations for your 3rd thread...!!!

then coming back to the story, i think khushi is correct in her place so do arnav,

i know she's quite scred to be away from him, but that's how we all achieve our dream.!

we work hard, stay away from our loved one's, lose inorder to gain something.! this is how the

world works.! and i really salute arnav's spirit. he's really being a marvelous counsellor.! i mean yeah he loves khushi but he don't want his love to be the obstruction is khushi's way to achieve her dream.! . hats off to him man. but m damn sure that he will be the only who will miss her like crazy when she will be away from him. loving the current track of the story. do continue soon..

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naina

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Posted: 13 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: kbtr
Hi naina;
First, congratulations on reaching thread three. Next, we are a big family of obsessed Kushi and Arnav fans, aren't we? lol that is sooo the understatement of the year if I ever heard one! my dearest mum thinks I need professional assistance...I, meanwhile, am happily in denial 😉

And last, but not least, Masterclass. Arghh! Why does Kushi always get the short end of the stick? So now, he's blackmailing her into taking the job (which she should have in the first place anyway!) and also blatantly pointing out her stupidity. He's in charge and calling all the shots! She should call his bluff and make him suffer! So what if he is the great ASR, he's putty in her hands and she should take advantage of that. She needs some confidence. Can you give her that?? Please? Pretty please??Oh! I'm sooo mad at him. Like he can turn his feelings on and off. I know, I know he's doing it for her own good, she needs to focus on Jalebi Junction - she's worked hard for it after all - but he doesn't have to be such a brute about it! She really should call his bluff. And make him stew for a bit. She should take the job and tell him to bugger off. Then he can do some pursuing...

LOVE IT... absolutely love your comments!!! I was so hoping to evoke some passionate reaction and you give me exactly this!! I'm feeling a little miffed towards Khushi and I really am hoping she'll find her usual dose of spunk somewhere and return fire at him.

As for our darling ASR... what can I say... dont forget he is a ruthless businessman doing what he knows best i.e. negotiate an outcome... but also remember... there's a lot about our darling Ms Gupta that he needs to learn about... perhaps about how to be putty in HER hands for instance...

OK here I go again telling you what to do in your story!! (Haha! The CVs have the same problem in reel life with the Forum!!) I guess I really should let you write your story. It is, after all soo much better than reel life!!

AS always, my sincere thanks for your comments - keep them coming and please rip my story apart if you have to... I ADORE constructive criticism 😊

Thanks for the update, you know I aways look forward to your stories.😃😃