Swaron FF:U & Me..Back to Us.Prt-10 pg-135 - Page 7

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Posted: 13 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: surbhimathur



You deserve all of it girl!

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hehe ...acha ... thank u thank u ... 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: meevee

This update cleared a few doubts but still my question remains who is the other woman in NY...Pari is Sharon, who has lost her memory I suppose and seperated from Swayam and Tanya...who I wunder has given up on searching for her and is waiting for her to cum to him??😕 Very interesting ... pls update soon




hey meera ...i will answer few more questions in the next part 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#63
Deeps i am really sorry for commenting this late. Was busy with exams.
I am real happy that you started a FF.
The first update was majestic how you described the nature and how it gave subtle hints of our SwaRon. I am really enjoying how the story is progressing with each update we get a clearer picture. The father daughter bond between Swayam and Tanya touched my heart. Tanya is so adorable and super cute loved their sweet conversation and the care, love and also fear Swayam shows towards his daughter proves how she means the world to him. Wouldn't say much about pari for now..but i do have some ideas how this is going forward to but will be better for me to wait and read the next update to have a much clearer picture. I am sure i am going to love this FF. nuff said.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#64
Nice update
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: Sudha-SK

Deeps i am really sorry for commenting this late. Was busy with exams.

I am real happy that you started a FF.
The first update was majestic how you described the nature and how it gave subtle hints of our SwaRon. I am really enjoying how the story is progressing with each update we get a clearer picture. The father daughter bond between Swayam and Tanya touched my heart. Tanya is so adorable and super cute loved their sweet conversation and the care, love and also fear Swayam shows towards his daughter proves how she means the world to him. Wouldn't say much about pari for now..but i do have some ideas how this is going forward to but will be better for me to wait and read the next update to have a much clearer picture. I am sure i am going to love this FF. nuff said.
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Sudha

hey sudha...thanx dear..for such a nice comment... m glad u liked the nature description part ..its my fav too..wanted to show swayam-tanya bond in the intial chapters..will try to unfold the story in interesting manner ...hope u will like them as well.. thanx again for commenting ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#66
hey deep
it's just awsome part & spsl saym & tanya photo copy of her mother 😃
& pari o kahi dur he & waiting ki koi shayd uska bhi wait kar rha ho so loved d updte & waiting for ander
plz do next one soon
Thanx for PM😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Okey deepi sorry for being late...
ok talking about ur second part ... as always it was great...i like the convo between tanya n swayam... sorry sorry" protective swayam" n u penned down that very well...
ab happy... nw dont make me wait for too long...deepi plz yaar...updat na...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesum !!!! lovd it !!!! plz do update the 3rd part soon !!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#69
Deepu update na please ..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey guys...This is the 3rd chapter of this FF...i have tried to clear some doubts in this part as well ...hope you all like it ...and thank you so much for these lovely comments ...they are really very encouraging ...😊😊😊


I would like to dedicate this chapter to my IF freinds...tejukor(tejal..for ur deadly dhamkiyan 😆) & my sweet little friend cuteswayu(nisha...belated happy birthday swthrt..ur birthday gift 😊)


Chapter -3


Night time ...Somewhere in New york...


Swayam and Tanya finished their dinner ...Swayam took Tanya to their bedroom ...As it was already late he tried to make her sleep...


Swayam:My little princess will sleep now ...

Tanya: shook her head in negative sign ..No daady 'I want you to complete the story '.then only I will sleep ...

Swayam:Which story ?

Tanya:prince and princess story ...smiling cutely...

Swayam:Oh...ohk ..ohk ...I will tell you the story ...(smiling back to his little angel)

Swayam:They came close to each other that night ...princess felt something different ...prince was affecting her heart ...they felt pure love and shared their secrets with each other ...then..

Tanya: Then was happened daddy ...(curious)

Swayam:then they drifted to sleep ...morning ...princess realized ..she lost sense and went so close to him...she left that place immediately ...she was confused about her feelings...prince decided to make her feel special...he started giving gifts to her ...as her secret admirer ...she used to smile and be happy after receiving those gifts...

Tanya: WOW...after that ...?

Swayam: Then one day she got to know that the prince is her secret admirer...she was hurt ...she thought prince tried to win her love through gifts...she fought with him and left him... He was hurt ... after many days ...many misunderstandings ... she realized his worth ...she came to his palace and confessed her feelings ...to her prince ...(he smiled ... recalling the sweet memories associated with the story)

He looked down ..Tanya was sleeping on his lap ... looking like a baby angel ... he caressed her hair'tucked her into her comfortable quilt ... kissed her forehead ...

He went to the small room attached to their bed room...switched on the lights ...the room was full of paintings of a girl ...a beautiful girl ...his first n last love of his life 'his wife ...his SHARON ...

He went near the cupboard ...took out a scrapbook ...a small n beautiful wooden box ...


He sat on the floor ...started turning pages of the scrapbook...he was going through the memories of a lifetime ...the first time he saw her ...her beautiful ...divine smile ...her cute gestures ...which he had captured during their college days ...first year of college ...pics taken without her notice ...they were natural...naturally beautiful ...

Then he reached those pages of their life when they were together in college ...their last year ...madly in love ...lost in each other ...they used to have fights ...misunderstandings ..but those fights made their love stronger n intense ... (he smiled recalling those beautiful moments they spent together )


Then he opened the box ...it was a box full of fond memories ... her bracelet which she lost somewhere in canteen in the first year of their college...her broken anklet ...he got in the rehearsal hall.. just after she finished her classical dance practice...her pink scarf ...her favorite one ...she left it in the rehearsal hall by mistake ...he included it to his prized possessions ..a dry rose ...from her ...to him... on their first confession day anniversary ...a bandage once he used to cure a cut on her hand ... a coke cane which touched her lips once ... Few chits she threw at him ..in the classroom ...just after they started dating 'as a secret couple ...a heart shaped badge she gave to him to wish him luck... Everything ...every single thing reminded him about her ...they were signifying her presence in his life ...she was still his LIFE ...


Tears started forming in his eyes ...within few minutes he was crying ...tears rolled down his cheeks ...he was trying to keep himself busy the whole day ..just to avoid her absence ...to avoid the emptiness in his life...but few weak moments he used to loose control on himself ..his tears ...his HEART...

He felt a soft touch on his shoulder ...he turned back...she was standing in front of him... Looking like an angel...but she was not looking happy ...


Girl:tum ro rahe ho swayam...tumhe pata he na me tumhe rote huye nehi dekh sakti '.

Swayam:stil crying ...(silent)

Girl: tried to wipe his tears ...but he moved back...

Swayam:kyu na rou me ... bacha kya he mere paas ...mera pyar ...meri life ...meri Sharon mere paas nehi he ...kyu na rou ...(hurt )

Girl:me hoon tumhare saath ...tumhe me aise nehi dekh sakti jaan ...plz rona band karo...

She hugged him tightly ... He hugged her back... as if ...he can't let her go ...he will die without her...she took him to his bed ...made him sleep...on her lap ... she wanted him to sleep peacefully ...


Morning ...

Swayam woke up... He found himself on his bed ...Tanya was sleeping quietly on the other side of the bed ... but he couldn't see her anywhere ...he was still hurt ....his face was tear stained ....the pain of loosing her was immense ...

WHY SHARON... WHY YOU ARE NOT HERE WITH ME ...WHY THE ONLY PLACE I CAN FEEL YOU ..TOUCH YOU ...HUG YOU... IS MY DREAM ...MY IMAGINATION...he was missing her badly ... as if she was his oxygen...mandatory for his living ...

WHERE ARE YOU SHARON...he asked himself ...

The pain was evident ...in HIS EYES...



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Some Hill station in India ...


THOSE EYES...the deep dark brown eyes... full of pain...hurt ...intensity ...& love ...They were staring at her with a piercing effect on her soul... As if they knew her ...knew her identity ...the reason of her existence ...


THOSE EYES ...


They are asking her thousand questions at once...emoting countless emotions at a time...as if they are inviting her to come with them...to some distant world...


She heard some murmurs from distance ...someone was calling her ...



Pari...beta ...utho ...baba aate hi honge ...tumhe seher jane ke liye tayar hona he na ...a sweet voice disturbed her sleep...she woke up...

The same dream ...she was seeing since last 3 years ...in fact it was the only thing she remembered from her past life...THOSE EYES...

Precap:

Haan Dad ... me aur Tanya ...hum India aa rahe he ..aap plz sare arrangements karke rakhiyega ...

So guys how was it? good ...bad ...very bad..boring ... plzzz do comment.. i will wait for your comments and feedback

Next update will be on page- 20 ...😊😊😊
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