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Meera

@MirageSwaron

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#21

Nice start...luvd ur description of nature and itz luv story...confusion toh hai lekin interesting lag raha hai...jaldi update karna wait kar rahe hain

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Aruba

@sweetcherry95

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#22

plzz continue

loved the started

is swaron tanya's parents

thnx for the pm

update asap

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tashu20

@tashu20

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

nice start...plz do continue it soon...!!!

thanx.. for the pm...!!!😊

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Rose

@--Rose--

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Wowww Wonderful ff yaar:-) Very INTERESTING:-) Please PM me when u update dear Plz plz plz... cont soon:-)

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tejal kor

@tejukor

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Hey deeps...nice FF yaar n nice start.😃 do continue...waiting for next update plz update asap...n thanks for the pm...

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Shishir Darsh

@marauder

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

First sorry for commenting so late. I was facing some probelems with my net. And I'm really happy to see that you have started your another work so soon after completing that SS.

Now coming to the first chapter - it was engazing. It left many things unsaid and reader inside me craving for more. And liked that as it is a FF I would myself enjoy if the mystery unfolds slowly over the time. Starting of this updat was enchanting and loved the way you described the natural surrounding (and symbolism of it in your FF) in it.

A intriguing start of the FF I would say. Even though you have not mentioned about Swayam and Sharon but I have pretty much guessed who they are in this chapter. But what reamin mystery is who are the rest characters. Looking forward to the next update.

P.S - I am glad you kept the name of Swayam's daughter Tanya. After reading it in so many FF, SS and OS the same name it feels like she is really a part of SwaRon story and family.

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Deepika

@_Deepika_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: marauder
First sorry for commenting so late. I was facing some probelems with my net. And I'm really happy to see that you have started your another work so soon after completing that SS.

Now coming to the first chapter - it was engazing. It left many things unsaid and reader inside me craving for more. And liked that as it is a FF I would myself enjoy if the mystery unfolds slowly over the time. Starting of this updat was enchanting and loved the way you described the natural surrounding (and symbolism of it in your FF) in it.

A intriguing start of the FF I would say. Even though you have not mentioned about Swayam and Sharon but I have pretty much guessed who they are in this chapter. But what reamin mystery is who are the rest characters. Looking forward to the next update.

P.S - I am glad you kept the name of Swayam's daughter Tanya. After reading it in so many FF, SS and OS the same name it feels like she is really a part of SwaRon story and family.

hey ...actually i was expecting ur comment(analysis😊 ) ...i felt like writing something on SWARON...didn't know whether u all will like it as its a bit different from regular FF/SS...the nature love part is my fav ...i was trying to symbolize swayam n sharon as heaven n earth ...m glad u liked it ... after reading so many OS/SS/FF with the name Tanya...i couldn't change the name...thanx for commenting...its very encouraging like always ...

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Deepika

@_Deepika_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: tejukor
Hey deeps...nice FF yaar n nice start.😃 do continue...waiting for next update plz update asap...n thanks for the pm...

hey tajal ... thanx dear ...for the sweet comment ... will update soon... ab jao padhai karo...😉😆👍🏼

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Tania

@--Tanzz--

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#29

hi deep! very nice start i must say...you have described the nature beautifully and the best part is you have included a small princess named tanya...coz my name is also tania;) ...waiting for the next part..

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Divya

@Winter_Falls

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#30

plz continue..nd do pm me..

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