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Posted: 13 years ago
#51

this update s splly dedicated to aromakriyaansh

Sharon;-kriyaaa

Swayam;-reyyy

Rey;-yes 'ek minit

Sharon;-kriya open the door

Rey;-one minit

Kriya;-sharon vat happen

Sharon;-r u all right

Kriya;-yes

Swayam;-ok chalo just hav a hot coffee

Rey;-hot tho chahiye

Swayam;-vat u mean

Rey;-kuch nahi'sab tum ney spoil kiya

Swayam;-mey ney kya spoil kiya

Rey;-kuch nahi patha

Swayam;-nahi tho

Rey;-teek ab javo or coffee lekkar avo

Swayam;-sharon coffee

Sharon;-yes darlng cmng

Kriya;-ye lo

Rey;-ye kya

Kriya;-cold coffee

Rey;-mujey hot coffee chahiye

Kriya;-no cold coffee

Rey;-no

Kriya;-yes

Rey;-no

Sharon;-stop it

Swayam;-rey ye sab kya kal hamara shaadhi aaj fight

Rey ;-hamara mathlab

Swayam;-o god ..u and kriya ,me and Sharon

Rey;-so

Sharon;-shaadhi key badh be eysey behave karoogi kya

Swayam;-kriya u crying ..yesab tumarey vajsey rey

Sharon;-kriya rukko mera bath suno 'kriyaaa

Swayam;-rey ab tum kush hona '.she s not martured rey so u shud try to understand her par tum

Sharon;-swayam tum be rey sey naraz hogaye ab mey kya karoo'reyyy

Rey;-sharon sorry I don't know vat 2 do

Sharon;-rey dnt worry..she s like a kid 'but no help frm my side becoz u shud do sm thng ..after ur marrag ths happn again I cant help u na do smthng spl

Rey;-yaa spl got it thankz

Sharon;-ur welcm

Sharon;-swayam y u r rude to him

Swayam;-he s behaving like a dumbo

Sharon;-par swayam

Swayam;-par var kuch nahi..tum uskea side hoona

Sharon;-no darlng '.

Swayam;-phir

Sharon;-she gave a kiss on his cheeks

Swayam;-ye kyat ha

Sharon;-ye ek medicine hey

Swayam;-medicine

Sharon;-haa to control the anger

Swayam;-wow that's a gud medicine kal sey mujey ye medicine kissi orko dena hey

Sharon;- is it

Swayam;-yes

Rey;- I am sorry

kriya:-😭😭

rey;-really i am sorry my princess

kriya;-😭 mujsey dhoor javo

rey;-kabe bi nahi

kriya;-tumey janapadeyga😭

rey;-nahi..were ever i go i vil take u too there if its our death too

kriya;-😭😲😭

rey;-plzz jaan plzzz i am sorry

kriya;-bye i am gng

rey;-were??

kriya;-tum sey dhoor

rey;-no never or u vont goo

kriya;-yes i am gng😭😭

she started too walk but or rey push her toward him..but she slipped the balanace and fell down and her leg got sprain...she started to cry loudly 😭😭😭..rey just closed her mouth vth his arms ..due to pain she started to bit his arms tightly ..he stlowly took her to the room and kept her on the bed ...

kriya;-😭😭😭 ou..cc...h...

rey;-kriya i am really sorry ..ek minit vait karo

kriya;-😭😭 avt r u gng to do again

rey took her leg in his lap but she s suffrng a huge pain ..so he kept his one hand her mouth if not she vil cry loudlly he started to do massagng her leg by his one hand ...and kriya s bitting his hand so hard to control her pain..but for rey his hands r not paining becoz ..kriya havng more pain than him

finally rey s done vth his work he spred sm spray on her leg and tied vth a cloth ...then he removed her hands from her mouth...

rey;-r u fine

kriya;-😭 yes par

rey;-par kya??

kriya;-rey ur hand s bleeding

rey;-thats ok...but i am sorry

kriya;-thats not ok ..

she took the first aid nesr by and clean the blood vth some spounch and spirit ...a tear came forward through reys cheekz...but kriya understood y ..she bandagd it and slowly kiised on it..rey get melted and hug her tightly...kriya i am soory i am not ment to be ..mujsey hogaye plz mujey chodkar math jana😭 tumara bina mujey jeena mushkil hoga ..tum mereyliye sirph ek gf and not only wife ..he started to kissing her so hardly showing his love...finally he reached the cute and beautiful pink lip of her ...he just started bitting on it ...she too respong back they remain like that for sm time


after that our swaron reached there...


precap suspens

Edited by karthikasekhar - 13 years ago
NishKP thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#52
wow amazing update
loved it
plz update next part
thanx for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#53
Wow. . .
Awsome update. . . .
Thankz a lot 4 d pm. . .
Nxt part jaldi update krna. . . . .
RiyaArShaKapoor thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#54
Awesum..:p..is baar sath mei koi nhi tha..:p
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Posted: 13 years ago
#55
rey caring kriya you potrayed it very well and swaron wow what a medicine idea jalli 👏
h he he and what a cute relationship yaar rey25 aur kriya 15 👍🏼
😊chalo meine tho comment kar diya
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Posted: 13 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: d3riya

Awesum..:p..is baar sath mei koi nhi tha..:p


sath mei koi nhi that ..kiska sath
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Posted: 13 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: karthikasekhar



sath mei koi nhi that ..kiska sath

yaad hai na pehli vali update mein mujhe shock lagte lagte bacha tha..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: d3riya

yaad hai na pehli vali update mein mujhe shock lagte lagte bacha tha..

ya😆😆..ek bar kreyansh ki shaadhi hogaye tho phir full on romance not only kreyansh swaron too
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: karthikasekhar


ya😆😆..ek bar kreyansh ki shaadhi hogaye tho phir full on romance not only kreyansh swaron too

yup :p
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Posted: 13 years ago
#60

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