*Completed* Th#2 ArHi SS:Unconditional

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#551

zehra, any chance of getting an update of DESTROYED - ooops iam sorry i always refer to this SS as destroyed - i mean any updates for unconditional today, zehra??

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Hina malik

@HinaMalik91

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#552

Great update.finally after reading it several times i m comenting.i m speechless.brilliant!!!!!!!!!.update soon.and thanks for the pm.tc

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farha

@farha5556

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

#553

continue soon honey pls pls pls pls

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jazzpreet

@jazzpreet

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#554

"hamara rajkumar" - perfect. that is like the ultimate slap in the face for arnav. damn. this update was short, but sweet. freakin fantastic.

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jenshad

@jenshad

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#555

I Want Update Already ; D 😳

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rachna

@cicilia9

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#556

beautiful zehra ! if i may call u that 😊 i really feel sorry for the 18 yr old whose dreams turned into night mares ! dont know if arnav will be able to rectify what he did !

thanks for the pm ! update soon !

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--BumbleBee--

@--BumbleBee--

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#557

That was such a beautiful chapter.

And it was his photo- Awww. beautifully penned.

Thanks for the PM..

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haminasto

@haminasto

Alumni

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#558

uh hmm so Khushi has no way to get out of the dark world that Arnav got her into.
Thats what she believes...so Arnav needs to atleast brighten that world even if she is stuck in it coz i dont knw if he'll be able to let her go or will she (if he does let her go) be able to built up anything , forgetting the ruins behind.
She doesnt have it in herself nor does anyone in her family i think...
all this makes wat Arnav is doing the only way to get her some normalcy.

The Lavanya flashback was a surprise.
Does Khushi remembers it?...If she does then theres a bright chance that she feels something amongst the numbness.
And im so waiting for the baby to make a move.

Note:- I generally dont read first person but then of course i think Khushi's emotion will be easier to be understood if they are in a flow which first person provides...
So yes i liked your writing style for Khushi : )