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Posted: 12 years ago
i wanted to pick my fav lines here.. but no copy prevented me.
Once again amazing update.
this FF is truly living up to its name just the way its prequel lived up to it own.. loving this unconditional love-- though it is not love yet i guess.. more of guilt...
waiting for the next part hun
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago

i loved it.finally asr is repenting

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Posted: 12 years ago
congrats for new thread..loved the update..
plz pm d nxt update..😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
I seriously feel for Khushi...will she ever come back to normal? And good Arnav realizes that whatever he has done, was totally unacceptable. Arnav still has a lot of amends to make. Beautifully written, and congrats on the new thread!
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice updt

luvd it

poor khushi hope she will become like old khushi again

please pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
DOUBLE L ...LOVED YOUR FILLER AS YOU SAID IT IS

SHE IS A DEAD BODY BREATHING ...O M G SO MUCH IS TAKEN AWAY

FROM HER ...IS SHE EVEN AWARE THAT SHE IS ALIVE CAN SHE FEEL

WHAT THIS BEAST IS DOING NOW TO REDEEM


YOU WRITE BEAUTIFULLY

A REQUEST : COULD YOU PLEASE MAKE TE UPDATES A BIT LONGER

WAS THINKING OF THIS SONG FOR HER

''TERI AANKH KE AANSOO

PEE JAUN AISI MERI TAQDEER KAHAAN ...TERE GHAMM MEIN TUJH

KO BEHLAAOON AISI MERI TAQDEER KAHAAN ...AYE KAASH JO MIL

KE ROTEY KUCHH DARD TO HALKE HOTEY ,BEKAAR NAA JAATEY

AANSOO KUCHH DAAG JIGAR KE DHOTEY

PHIR RANJJ NA HOTA ITNA HAI TANHAI MEIN JITNA ...ABB JAANE YEH

RASTAA GHAMM KA HAI AUR BHI LAMBA KITNA

HALAAT KI ULJHAN SULJHAOON AISI MERI TAQDEER KAHAN TERI

AANKH KE AANSOO PEE JAUN ''

THANKS FOR THE PM

KEEP ME POSTED




KKKA


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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome as usual... loved it... thanks for pm... waiting... :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Congrats for the new thread ⭐️ You go Girl !
Haha, and as for the story, arnav finally had the brains to know more about her likes and dislikes .
Like changing the house for something brighter, massaging her hair.

Seems like the next chapter would be exciting as well. I'm waiting
😃
Edited by selcouth-names - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful and awesome update, you should not consider your update as fillers cause any update received is a pleasure to read. Arnav needs to get some jalebie's in the house or the ingredients to make them, he might notice or get a reaction from Khushi. Thanks for the PM, Cant wait to read more xx
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Posted: 12 years ago
i just started reading this ff and its wonderfully!
so dark! arnav was such a jerk! poor khushi 😭
can't wait for further updates!

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