It Should Have Been You #2 (ArSh FF) IMP NOTE PG - Page 4

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Posted: 13 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: karan-shilpa

First of ol.. CONGOOO for new thread
Second :D its simply perfect , luved it
Seriously.. You wrote it soo beautiful...
Armaan is a sweetheart <3
Conti soon
Thnx for d pm :)


THANK YOU!
I am so glad you liked it!!! He really is a sweetheart!! You know after I write, I still think about him 😛😳 I miss him so much on screen!! But seriously thank you so much, it means a lot!🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: -Aliya-

I'M SO LATE

but omg congrats on your new thread. so well deserved. I know i still need to comment.and i will soon hopefully =)


YES YOU ARE! I was wondering where you went! But so so happy to see your comment! I hope that "hopefully" actually means "of course Supriya I will comment very soon!"
I'll be waiting!😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: KaSh_luv

Congrats on the new thread!

ahhh I don't even know how to react to this update..i'm always left in a magical trance after reading ur updates...it's like...like..i dont know... what could be more magical than KaSh baarish?!☺️
It's hard to imagine what your gonna come up with next and i cant wait!



thank you so so so much!!! 😃
I'm SO SO happy you think that too, KaSh baarish is just...AHHH!!!! I've had this scene in mind since so long, finally wrote it in!
Trust me sweety, even I have no clue what's coming up, I just hope you keep enjoying it!
Again, thanks so much! 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
Supriya
1st of all a very hearty congratulations on the thread 2. May this amazing FF continues till innumerable threads. Coz I just can't get enough of the story. I just want to read on and on. Its all because of your amazing writing, great story line and obviously my favorite part your dialogues.😊
A: tum aaj tak nahin samajh payi...tumhe haq hai Shilpa...pura haq hai...
This dialogue literally touched my heart AGAIN!❤️
Every passing sentences kept me hooked as to what's coming up next. Their Aakhon hi Aakhon mein scene while Shilpa was standing at the door and Armaan was getting drenched was like Haaye!! Breathtaking.😳
The scene where she was taking step by step towards Armaan making belive herself that i was actually happening. I couldn't believe that it was happening. Suddenly all so famous Rain and Romance Combo carried me away.😆
She didn't realize that he has gorgeous eyes before? Like really?😲
Man that convo was beautiful. Simple words can make a convo perfect.😃
Awwiee!! He just swept off her feet?? I'm having butterflies. Eeep!! Where are these type of heroes in real life? While spinning he shouted that he loved her was something new and beautiful. They have never shown something like this ever on TV I guess. You have written this scene magically.❤️

S: tum...bahut...bahut...you're so hot!
Haaye!! Blush😳

A: tumhe ab pata chala hai?
Aaa!! Double blush. ☺️

There was only one way to react to that. Only one reasonable reply. She leaned forward a little and kissed his cheek. This was it, the most in love he had ever been. The most overwhelmed and consumed by someone else he had ever been. If it were up to him he would stand here all night long and all day long. Just holding her. Breathing in her scent, feeling her warmth against him, looking into her eyes and seeing his world, and just being with her and laughing. But he knew that couldn't happen. Even if this was the most perfect half an hour of his life and the most romantic rain of his life, it had to end. Besides, he could feel her hands shivering and his own as well.


So slowly, romantically and oh so naturally he literally led her back towards the door. While still holding onto her in his arms and he was pretty much pulling her. She hadn't released him from her arms either. It had taken him about five minutes to get to her and he had only realized it when his back hit the door and there was no more room left for him to pull her. Eyes still set upon each other, they both said the same thing, at the same time and with the same intensity.

A/S: I love you.

[And to this...there was only one reply.]

A: Oyyye Hoyye...

This part literally blew me away with its intensity. I had no words describing this scene so I just Copy pasted.😳☺️

Aaa. That Tattoo scene. Somebody needs to pinch me. Eeeeks!😲

My heart did somersaults. Was that for real? I was actually shocked too Shilpa actually had a tattoo?😲

"lagta hai tum meri liye hi bani ho...miss tattoo".I was drooling over it.

"LOVE" and I can already imagine how beautiful that tattoo was. And Armaan kissed it. Supriya now you've got to understand what I was feeling while reading this part coz I have no words describing my excitement.😳☺️

Oye hoye!! The best Towel Scene ever like ever. I'm mesmerized by it.😳

When I opened my inbox the 1st PM was yours and I was like YAY!! An update.
This chapter to be precise the half end literally had me blushing all along imagining the scene. You had me drooling on Armaan Supriya. Its not my fault actually.😆

Phenomenal and beautiful update. Can't wait for the next.😃

Update real soon😊

Lots of Love.🤗


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Posted: 13 years ago
#35
Congrats for the new thread
The part was superb as usual
thanks for the pm and please
continue soon !!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36
wow congrats on the new thread
this was one of the best n romantic parts of this ff
n i loved it sooo much
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37
congrats 4 da new thread
Luvd da update x
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
Congratulations for the new Thread dear!!!!!
fabulous update!!!!!!!
please do continue soon!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
congrats for the second thread of this kashwome ff supriya 😎
loved the update and as u said it was full of romance...romance in the rain 😳 armaan made it sure that whatever she wished for, she gets it...what more a girl wld need ❤️ loved their dance scene..and moreover love their love ...
but the most surprising part was, shilpa has tattoo 😲 omg ...and its of "love" ...aww my shona ...and armaan kissed it ☺️ what i liked most is his dialogue after that if he didn't stop then he wld not be able to control his emotions ...nice one supriya 👏 thanks for the PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
#40
PERFECT ;)

1st of all congratulations on reaching 2nd thread, for a writing like this i believe even a number of threads will not be enough. ;)
girl you are totally surprising me from last 3-4 updates,
i'm loving the way you are increasing the romance dosage ;)
these ArSh are way too much adorable.this rain encountar made me lost in them =)
loved the update, even loved more Armaans gentleness.
more importantly as usual loved ArSh lines.
now looking for next update. *excited* =)

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