Ariya SS: Adhoori si dua..(Chap 9C - Last) 06/01

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pravallika

@prava55663

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#181

superb...arjun missing..hope he is safe...

waiting for next part..cont soon..

thanks for pm

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riushibabo

@riushibabo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#182

ooohhh..arjun gone missing

ariya moment was great...

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scorp1AN

@scorp1AN

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#183

that was nice but what happen to arjun! hope he is alright.. please update soon! can't wait to read the next update already! so excited!

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little.princess

@little.princess

Explorer

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Posted: 12 years ago

#184

Totally loved the update.. Specially the flashback..

Thanx 4 the pm and update the nxt part soon.. Pm me whn u update..

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sneha

@Sneha113

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Posted: 12 years ago

#185

awesome update..!!!

sorryyy kafi late hoo gya😕

lol..riya us wallet ko phad degi..kaise hath se kya🤣

shree was fab with his "naya wallet la doon..online sales chal rahe"🤣

gadgets se niklo😆

and rathore with his"miya-biwi dono ne milkr kabaddi ka akhada bna dia"😃

poor riya was soo worried something will happen to arjun even though he made her trust him..but it happend

emotional,lovable and touching romantic scenes😭😊

hopppee arjun is safe anyhow😕

poor shree had to lie infront of riya

oh..riya saved arjun from goons and got shot herself😕

shree-chotu knew about riya's feelings!!

seeing her dream about him arjun finally proposed her☺️wid shree rathore and chotu behind😆

I hope you will update more of it!!

thanx for the pm.

Edited by priya00147 - 12 years ago

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Niki

@luvzindagi

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#186

Sorry for the Super duper late reply Avantika Di,
Have been really busy with the studies

I know I have said this a lot of times but you are absolutely AMAZING author
you grip your readers into your stories... 😊 I totally loved it
This update made me smile, laugh, emotional, and scared for Arjun all at a time... 😊
Thanks for the PM pls update soon