FanFaraktion: It's back, and how-pg81! - Page 5

Originally posted by: EXPELLIARMUS

Oye..sone do bachchi ko. It's practically morning where she is.

Originally posted by: madmaxine

OH.

DO I LOOK LIKE I CARE??

SEE MY FONTZ !!

Originally posted by: EXPELLIARMUS

I second what Expelly (sorry, can i call u that😳?) has said. I can do without tom. epi but not without the update for this FF!!!😔

Originally posted by: howcome

I am still trying to understand if your writing has any subtext or metaphors. How can you write something that openly says everything and not care for symbolisms at all.

For instance when anjali was running down towards shyam was there a lizard on the wall?

Before he clinged on to her was there a symbolism where you noticed that the fruit bowl on the table was empty, silently signifying missing baby?

When khushi felt like fairy god mother did you see stars literally and metaphorically?

I urge you to improvise your ff with these kind of metaphors etc since it is "different" ... Ofcourse if you have done it and has missed my keen eye then i am sure trp audience cant see it and will not get the basic story either... So sochna hai tho soch lo...

Originally posted by: memyselfandme1

Well, well, well! The first episode has certainly (ROFL) set the scene for a truly unique and original piece of work which should at least bring a trp of 200+! Definitely an epic with more potential than some reputed PH! Just one important question - do you have sustainable budget for ur venture?

Originally posted by: madmaxine

Yo kaisehuaji!

You missed my sari metaphor? It was a subliminal message about how "saari" everyone's going to be, once Shyam rips them all a new one.

And I may have missed many small things because this chapter was written without me watching either today's or Friday's episode. I am on a strict IPK detox program.

Originally posted by: howcome

Truth to be said i beat you on this one...today is day 3 and detox working well, except that i still enjoy ranting 😳...

Oh... Saari for missing the sari ...yes all will be very sad when shyamJI does his half yearly drill of band bajoing the entire raizada clan...cryanj is such a sweetheart, no? she does wear see through sari but cant see through husband! But cant blame her theres too much beef to see through... Pavam anji!

Originally posted by: howcome

Truth to be said i beat you on this one...today is day 3 and detox working well, except that i still enjoy ranting 😳...

Oh... Saari for missing the sari ...yes all will be very sad when shyamJI does his half yearly drill of band bajoing the entire raizada clan...cryanj is such a sweetheart, no? she does wear see through sari but cant see through husband! But cant blame her theres too much beef to see through... Pavam anji!