#2 Guzarish [My version D3] Parts 4-11

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Amrita Sengupta

@idiot_box

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#151

Awesome update!!i really like Smriti here!!She seems human here..She convinced Kriya to write to Rey..I really liked the SwaRon part..they are coming closer to each other!Now please update jaldi se now!!

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GoldenLuna

@GoldenLuna

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#152

awesome...

loved it...

waiting to see wht is written in the letter...

thnx for pm...

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shaani2209

@shaani2209

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#153

Lovely update khushi...

really loved the fact that you made Sharon happy about swayam being there for her...she blushing to the thought of he holding her and then the way swayam entered the locker room just to be there for her, caring least abt anything else...

Liked that you made smriti be understanding towards kria and she actually writing the letters was a relief...vishaka's pov in last sentence did stand out for me there...

the song choice and the way you liked it was nicely done, i really liked it...

really wish creatives ki dimag ki batti jalli hoti uss waqt...

thanks for the pm...

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Sreya Roy

@sreya19roy

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#154

Brilliant update khushi...exceptionally beautiful 😊

The highlight of the update for me was definitely the song n the way it has been put into this update is amazing 😃 the selection of the places where it shud be kept was outstanding...the places u have chosen r exactly apt n it did give me that feeling coz I was actually playing that song in my head n I did connect to it...all in all the song was the best part of the update for me n it is definitely the best usage of song in any update that I have ever read by any writer...so kudos to u darling...keep it up 👍🏼

Yeah I did like smriti in this update n in the previous one too...I feel bad for her that she have to do all this n be the villain in her own daughter's life bt the good part is that, eventually kriya will too understand her(I hope so) n things will get better 😊

Lovely update khushi...eagerly waiting for the next one...update soon 😊

Thanx for the pm 😊

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Araina

@-Araina-

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#155

-.Note.-

Hey guys! *phew* So tired! I don't think I will be able to give an update tomorrow, Friday.. ie on 14th... I updated Sajda yesterday and IJD today (just now) I have no energy left to reply to any more comments... I'm really sorry but hope you all will understand! Just one day... I will give an update on Saturday AND on Sunday. Hope that will make up for the late update? Thanks!

Ps: where the hell are my spammers? 😳 haha i know you guys must be busy. It's 'kay.

See you all soon!

Love,

Khushi.

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Rucha

@rock_ruvi

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#156

Awesome update ..!
Loved it ..!
Update soon ..!

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madhu

@Madhu_ArSha

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#157

K. . . . .
I vl b egarly waitng 4 2mrw as m realy xcitd to knw wat hapnz nxt. . . . . . . . .
N yes jst nw read ur ijd update. . . .
It was super awsome too. . . . . .
Jst wish tat 2mrw jaldi aa jaye. . . .