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Posted: 13 years ago

Writer Note

Thank u so much everyone for ur beautiful response and commentsMeans a lot to me. 🤗
keep reading the story.i hope u ll liked the coming parts.🤗🤗
P.S...welcome to new readers who are joining me with this FFPlz add me in ur buddy list so it would be easy for me to send PMs.
Maria...remember me in ur prayers
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Posted: 13 years ago

A Dark Love

Misery swelled in her chest as she looked at him through her lashes, who had been straightened himself after taking his revenge, His eyes raked her with contempt as shifting his weight completely to driving seat he turned the keys and started the car, She spun away her head, hugging herself with her arms and moving to the side of the window so she could put as much distance between them as possible, protecting herself from this beast but was it possible? Raising her hand she wiped off the blood with her palm and a sob escaped with the new fresh tears that were shimmering in her eyes and Mayank who was getting annoyed at her continuous crying turned his face and regarded her with an angry glare "don't eat my brain with your fake crying, do you think your crocodile tears can affect on me?" She caught her breath at the venom in his expression and she felt as if all the air had been sucked from her lungs to see that much amount of rage, hate in his eyes for her, and she knew she couldn't say anything. She had moved into a bitter, pain-filled place where speech was impossible and she did it with her own will, she couldn't blame anyone for what was happening with her, "I don't want to see your crocodile tears all the time, keep it in mind, now you'll have to do what I want" his lips twitched on the bitter lines and he shot her with rage, she swallowed the lump formed in her throat and then gulps of air before parted her lips to speak, "I don't know why are you doing all this but I know one thing I don't expect mercy from you"

Her voice came out like a shaking whisper and a few more tears shed from her eyes, his body stiffened at her words and he regarded her with a great venom, "good you shouldn't expect something good from me as I am going to make your life hell" he snorted ,with a rage floating in his voice and she caught her breath, Humiliation, fear washed over her in sickening waves as she met with his eyes, "I'll never forgive you for whatever you did with me" She sucked in her breath and whispered, "oh!!Really" Mayank drawled sarcastically suppressing a smile giving her mocking look, "you will see one day" Her words choked and giving him a brief hatred look she turned away her face and he shrugged with a victorious grin on his lips. She stared glumly out the window trying to hide her misery under the cover of her stiffen face. Despite the gloom of the chilly, a beautiful rainy day she had to admit it was the darkest day of her life.

He turned off the engine in front of the huge ,big bungalow, "this is my house" he proudly announced but she could feel the mockery in his tone, she knew he wanted to make her realize he had the power to take his father's everything. When Nupur remained silent and unmoved, Mayank ran out of patience. "if you're thinking I am going to open a door for you then you are wrong" he hissed regarding her with a cold look but She didn't utter a word in response and it had hit on his ego making his mind to take the revenge of this insult He got out of the car, pulled a key from his pocket, and fiddled with a control box on a stone pillar to the left. Within seconds, the gates with their praying hands swung open. He climbed back in the car, put it into gear, and drove forward. He rounded a small curve, and Nupur caught her first glimpse of the house, it was really a big bungalow.

The gravel drive ended and the car stopped in front of the front door, he climbed down the car and a man rushed to take the key to drive the car towards the garage. She mounted the marble stairs following him and slipped inside the house, she looked up her gaze caught her first glimpse of the interior, it was well decorated from inside too.

He turned back and regarded her with cold eyes, "if you have been scanned everything can I led you towards my room"

She barely repressed a shudder as his words registered in her mind and she just could nod her head in reply, they headed upstairs and he opened the door of the master bedroom, he threw himself on a big giant sized bed and stretched his arms, "your father should be happy as he gets saved to spend money on your wedding, I know he is like a beggar at this time" He laughed out shooting up her with a mocking look ,She felt as if she'd been kicked in the stomach she gasps for air meeting with his gaze "but he has a golden heart and you're heartless"

He stared at her for a long moment, and then walked forward, his steps unhurried, but still threatening. He grabbed her shoulder pulling her she hit with his chest and looked up, "yes, I am a heartless person and it would be good for you to keep your tongue in your mouth, you don't know who I am? And now what I can do with you."

He brushed past her and headed down the stairs. She stood there with her heart pounding as he disappeared out the front door. Moments later, she heard the sound of the car driving away.

Deeply feared by his words she knelt down on her knees hiding her face in her palms.

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here is next part,i hope you'll like it😳

Edited by Maria. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
THat was Brilliant part
you are a Brilliant writer,i am loving this dark story..Mayank character is really very different and unique..superb
loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing. buy why mayank is so much heartless
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Posted: 13 years ago
Very nice update.Bt I m feeling there must b some reason behind Mayank's this behavior.
Thnx for pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome. I'm really confused that if anyone could fall in love with the same person who had ruined your life. Poor Nupur. Continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Am so luving it dear superb
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update
loved it lodsss
Beautifully written
loved it to d coreee
Sigh!!!!!!!! felt bad for Nupur...
waiting eagerly for the next part...
loved it lodsss
love u lodsss SIS..🤗🤗🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb part.. awsome...
loved it..
Something a unique character you have potrayed of Mayank.. and i am loving this...one...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Feeling bed for Nupur
other then that Awesome Maria
thanx sis
love u

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