ARSHI SS: MARRIED TO GET DIVORCED cr - Page 37

Originally posted by: Appy_Indy

RK i am trying my best buddy. suddenly a very imp work came so i had to leave. i am back. just about to complete this one. then i will sit with ons2

Originally posted by: shalinii173

Hi Appy_indy0„2

0„2"Married to get divorced" - Nice start with a very new story line. ( i addressed u and mentioned the name of ur ss just coz so many people are discussing/fighting/debating or watever on a different topic here. so i made clear why am i here?0„2😊

I got something to say about ur work. Actually few days back i came across ur os (i am new to IF) 0„2and later read all ur stories. i still remember reading ur "Bonded from the womb" in the airport (using wi-fi)0„20„2and i opened so many pages same time so that i could even read them0„2in the flight without wi-fi.0„2and my family was really annoyed with my0„2behavior coz i was in my own world reading ur FF. (I was kind of addicted to that FF0„2😊). 0„2I follow all ur FF (and of course i do comment0„2😃)0„20„2but just now i came to know that u make grammatical and spelling errors0„2😲0„2i have never noticed them0„2before0„2(may be coz i am not so good in english0„2😉) I think 0„2ur creative writing and the beautiful story line makes us ignore everything (errors) i guess. I just love ur OS,0„2SS,0„2FF 😊0„2 and all ur writings. thats all i could say dear. So keep rocking girl 👍🏼0„2

But why you didnt msg me about this new SS?😡0„2deleted my name?😲

may b di deltd u by mistake..actualy di filterd her buddy list sme days ago coz many people werent cmntng...once pm her sayn u do coment in ol her updates nd snd hr a request again...😊

Waiting for the next part pls...

Originally posted by: shalinii173

Hi Appy_indy

"Married to get divorced" - Nice start with a very new story line. ( i addressed u and mentioned the name of ur ss just coz so many people are discussing/fighting/debating or watever on a different topic here. so i made clear why am i here? 😊

I got something to say about ur work. Actually few days back i came across ur os (i am new to IF) and later read all ur stories. i still remember reading ur "Bonded from the womb" in the airport (using wi-fi) and i opened so many pages same time so that i could even read them in the flight without wi-fi. and my family was really annoyed with my behavior coz i was in my own world reading ur FF. (I was kind of addicted to that FF 😊). I follow all ur FF (and of course i do comment 😃) but just now i came to know that u make grammatical and spelling errors 😲 i have never noticed them before (may be coz i am not so good in english 😉) I think ur creative writing and the beautiful story line makes us ignore everything (errors) i guess. I just love ur OS, SS, FF 😊 and all ur writings. thats all i could say dear. So keep rocking girl 👍🏼

But why you didnt msg me about this new SS?😡 deleted my name?😲

OMG,did I read it right?!?!?!

Arnav and Khushi are f*ck*ng on their 'compromised' wedding night,and taking their "so called" lover's name?!?!?

Firstly,I dint get comfused why ARSHI were taking different names,as I read in the beginning bout the alcohol effect!!

And sh*t,these virgin bodies are now united!!wow'😃

And the way u described their little 'polite' love making session,played a havoc inside me!!

I am too happy today,and while reading this update AGAIN(I read it yesterday too,but was unable to comment due to some reasons'😳 ),there was a full time grin or smirk wat ever u call it'.a big 😃 on my face'.

And it's a teak bed'.🤣'..

In IPKKND,buaji sleeps on teak ki lakdi ka palang'.teak wood is strong indeed!!!🤣

And when I read-

it was Arnav who was making love to his wife Khushi, I read it with pride'.😃

and khushi will call arnav Hubby in public'.☺️

it's a WOW new S.S.from my very dear Appy_Indy'.

Totally enjoyed it'.i am writing that I enjoyed,coz yes,I really did enjoy''

Different concept!!an amazing one'..😳

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Well,I guess in 6 mahino mei bahut kuch ho sakta hai nahi,ho jayega..😉

And ya,I read the note'.am always ok with what ever u provide me to read'..

I love whatever u write'.then be a dark saga(ONS II),an unconscious love story, a friendship bonding(BFTW II)'a pregnancy bonding(BONDED-1)' one night love continuing(ONS I)''or be it an extraordinary out of the way story(My mom's boyfriend)'.or opposites attract'.😳

I have read all till date,and love them all'.waiting for each of those updates'.😊

And waiting for the first chapter of this one too'.

Thnks for taking out ur time and always reading my comments'.

Love u and ur updates loads Appy_Indy'.muuahhh''..

Shraddha''😉

(again a long one...sorry,could not help myself...😛)

Does your brain naturally come up with these concepts? 😆 interesting indeed!! Excited to read what all is gonna happen in the next six months 😳 thanks for the PM

wow...what a start..intersting..cant wait for it

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RESPECT??!!!! We all know how respectful she is 😆 Mentioning the maturity level and critizising their work in public forum...Wow! Iam amazed by her politeness LOL. I hope she don't mention Arnav/Barun as Barun uncle and Sanaya as maamiji 😆

What the heck..am i back in some school lectures... well Appy darling firstly u dont need to apologise..i just luv the way u write..if ur writing would have been crappy then i swear i would ve never read it...it is only through ur awesome writing that i came to know u n we became friends.. i jst wnt to clarify to the person who pointed fingers at u that darling we r humans n we r not perfect...may be there might be some spelling mistakes or some gramatical ones...but that that doesnot stop from conveying her thoughts to us...the bottomline is that whatever she writes reaches our hearts n we dont give a damn to the silly mistakes... i must confess that i m a convent educated n english is my forte but that doesnt stop me from making any gramatical mistakes...u see i m also human😆 ...i m writing frm phone if there r any mistakes plz spare me😉 Appy i was like😡 after reading this but girl u dont need to clarify... love u the way u r..keep rocking... I m sorry if i jst hurt somehow...but this is what i felt and if u can bring such things in open than why cant i😆