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Chaitalee Ghosalkar

@Eccentrica

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#911

OMG Saiyu...what was this?😆 I mean seriously...I've never read such a hilarious piece of fiction.

And to say that this was your first attempt at writing...kamaal kar diya. The SS was so enthralling that I just couldn't let go off it without reading it completely.

There were so many lovable things in this...but the best aspect was the writing style; the nonvocal monologues was what made it stand out and give us an insight to each and every character so well.

All through the story, even thought Arnav was faltering when it came to Khushi, he still seemed sane out of the whole lot, but the last chapter where he spreads his arms in anticipation of Khushi was so ROFL worthy🤣...mazaa aaya!

Moving on to your other works!😊

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#912

I just read the story...Whole together...it is just awesome...from the very first line to last line...I was feeling a little down today...after reading it I am really feeling much much better...THANK YOU SOOO MUCH...

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#913

I for one would love to read all that is in your wastepaper basket. Please post it.

Read the story again. Loved it.

Just gors to prove that if the story is good , it doesn'y matter if there is lots of Arhi in it or not.

I loved the way you dealt ith all the characters.

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pia-loves-sarun

@pia-loves-sarun

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#914

awsmmm story...<3

loved ittt to the bits..!!!!!!!

i just love ur characters.,,,

fantastic fic,,,,,,<3😊😊

so hilarious... ur comic timing is awsmmm...😊😊

asr in dis ff is so adorable n khushi i so love her...<3

loved d ending,,!!!!!!!

great work..😊

hat's offf di...<3

u r an amazing writer...!!!!!!!!

here's a tght wali jaddu ki jhappi for uh..<3

mwaa😊

Edited by pia-loves-sarun - 12 years ago

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LooneyLuna

@LooneyLuna

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#915

Expelji sent me here!

And I loved every word, every character, every scene in this story! You are a fabulous writer..and like mami must I say an IPK encyclopaedia, in the way you understand each character!

This is how IPK would have been if they made use of all the characters. A nice family rom-com. Ahh. How do I even begin summarising each and every character and the traits I loved, like shyam not being an evil psychopath but a protective brother to khushi and a friend philosopher guide to arnav. And just like him everyone else had their quirks, mostly building on the ones we have come to know from the show..you didnt forget anyone! Not HP not Lakshmi. Thode pagal hai par cute hai!

And not only the characters but the way you payed attention to different emotions..the humour, the tears, the mystery, so much irony when you relate it back to the show I was mostly LOLing through it all, the rabba-veys, the farqs, the jealousy, the blushing, the khushi, the plotting (which is what us phangirls would do too!), the nuske's.

I love how we could hear everyone's inner thoughts..that was sooo much fun!

The storyline was also quite interesting...arnav and khushi's bickering, then manofying, then the jealousy, the manofying..oh how the different stages of love evolved!

The stubborn, passionate khushi is always always a favourite. You wrote her character soo well.

The age old asr vs arnav, really enjoyed how that aspect of his character was played out.

But above all how the universe of this story revolved around the unnamed wala love..hamesha!

Hitashi

ps. Thanks for sharing such a delightful story! dil khush kita (or whatever it is they say in punjabi)

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LooneyLuna

@LooneyLuna

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#916

The praise for the last line of the story and mamaji is missing in the above comment.

Also cause they deserve a special mention!

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Srija Singh

@srija.singh04

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#917

I was laughing so hard, my room-mate must have thought I have gone mad... well actually she already thinks I am crazy but now I am sure she'd be considering changing rooms or better yet sending me off to some lunatic asylum. Though I won't really mind you know, that is if they allow me to keep my laptop and you continue to write such fabulous stories on Arshi😆

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hbkumar

@hbkumar

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#918

Plz attempt comedy again...by God I laughed out loud at so many places in this story that my family thinks I have gone a little cookoo missing ArShi 😛

this was so refreshing, so funny, so positive, so real...no unnecessary drama, no villains..and yet it was so entertaining...it didnt have passionate arshi encounters..yet they were so adorable..i like it when an arshi story has well developed characters apart from arshi..your shyam, lavanya, anjali, nani, mami, akaash, payal, bua, nk n yes..mama, laxmiji, op, hp, jp😆 were so endearing..plz do comedy again..you were genuinely fabulous👏