SS: His Smiling Girl Thread 2: Part 21 Updt Pg 115

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Priya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#581

Smita i must say u r 1 awesome writer... n beautiful update n u nvr disappoint me... Waitin fr ur next part...

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Swati Hansraj

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Posted: 13 years ago

#582

Beautiful update Smita.

That "Her road to discovery..." paragraph was so intense, hot and so mesmerizing in the way u have painted the scene with ur words coupled with the pics, that my heart was going 'dhak-dhak'

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luvraj4ever

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Posted: 13 years ago

#583

loved the update...waiting for the wedding...

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snoopy84

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Posted: 13 years ago

#584

Great update they are both real sweet cant wait for the wedding

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mayabegum

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Posted: 13 years ago

#585

Awesome update,

i loved the nuahgty maami at the end ;)

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JerryTheMouse

@JerryTheMouse

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Posted: 13 years ago

#586

Awesome awesome awesome!

I have no other words!

I'm blushing at the descriptions, even the show doesn't have this impact!

Thank you!

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sun_shine_girl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#587

Arnav the devil, making Khushi do his bidding without the innocent girl realizing what she is doing.

And Smita, I don't know how you can take something as mundane as washing haldi from each other and turn it into such sensuous moments infused with longing, desire...